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For this month's writing prompt write a scene using the following sentence to start;

The streets were deserted. Where was everyone? Where had they all gone?

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Our monthly writing tips are written by our very own TerishD. You can read more in Terish's Blog located in "The Abstractions" area of the forum.

Look Back

When not able to write ahead, it helps to look back. In my case I had written a paragraph ahead of the story. What I needed to do was add a section of exposition (talking) presenting some facts. In going back, I realized that I could insert a section where a 'tour' of the surroundings could be done. This allowed for character interaction, story development, and other things that enabled me to present the facts in an entertaining manner.

One should not face a writer's block with the mentality of bursting through it. I have found in my own experience that a writer's block is usually due to my mind indicating that it has a problem in 'channeling' the story. One reason might be a re-imagining of certain story points. Another reason however is that there is a problem in where you are at in the story, so you need to look back and find out the problem with the 'journey' that prevents the tale from advancing.

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PostSubject: a love story   a love story Icon_minitimeMarch 19th 2010, 9:03 am

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The country road I walked on was gritted and plants on its verges were full of
white dust. It was a warm summer day and the wind from the North Sea had
stilled. There were few cars on the road and the few that came weren't going
my way. I was thirsty, up ahead a small farm building, I turned right and walked
up a cart wheel lane, knocked on the farm door, a woman opened, and asked
for water. She took me to the well hoisted up a bucket of cold, clear water
and gave me a tin ladle to drink from. She was a woman with an open face,
warm brown eyes and full red lips, her hair was tucked under a green shawl.
Told me her husband was a bee keeper and away for the day and since they had
no children she often felt lonely. When she had finished talking I kissed her lips
softly turned and left. At the end of the farm lane I looked back, she was still
standing there by the well. The tin ladle, in her hand, glinted like a holy grail.
We both had a dream to cherish till old age erased our bond till roadside dust.
Feeling strong now I walked fast and reached my destination before nightfall.
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