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Monthly Writing Prompt
For this month's writing prompt write a scene using the following sentence to start;

The streets were deserted. Where was everyone? Where had they all gone?

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Our monthly writing tips are written by our very own TerishD. You can read more in Terish's Blog located in "The Abstractions" area of the forum.

Look Back

When not able to write ahead, it helps to look back. In my case I had written a paragraph ahead of the story. What I needed to do was add a section of exposition (talking) presenting some facts. In going back, I realized that I could insert a section where a 'tour' of the surroundings could be done. This allowed for character interaction, story development, and other things that enabled me to present the facts in an entertaining manner.

One should not face a writer's block with the mentality of bursting through it. I have found in my own experience that a writer's block is usually due to my mind indicating that it has a problem in 'channeling' the story. One reason might be a re-imagining of certain story points. Another reason however is that there is a problem in where you are at in the story, so you need to look back and find out the problem with the 'journey' that prevents the tale from advancing.

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PostSubject: Easter Egg   Easter Egg Icon_minitimeMarch 12th 2010, 6:45 am

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Kingston’s bay, the sea was shimmering translucent green,
my ship was anchored there; saw the sandy bottom where
red snappers swam. An open chest of gold coins in the sand,
metal totally inedible, the invertebrates took no interest.
I thought of Captain Morgan and since it was Easter he had
gone away. Thought of calling our master and point to
the untold riches, but he was a man who never deviated
from his sea charts. Gold, Jesus, Capt Morgan and Easter,
no navigational points for him to focus on.
The shadow of a shark hovered above the treasure trove,
the sea darkened, wind blew from east, as currents whirled
and there were a draft from flapping, unseen, black wings
obscuring the anchor’s resting place.
Long Friday, the chest was buried deep in the sand, I didn’t
tell anyone, and we were bound for New Orleans.
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