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For this month's writing prompt write a scene using the following sentence to start;

The streets were deserted. Where was everyone? Where had they all gone?

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Look Back

When not able to write ahead, it helps to look back. In my case I had written a paragraph ahead of the story. What I needed to do was add a section of exposition (talking) presenting some facts. In going back, I realized that I could insert a section where a 'tour' of the surroundings could be done. This allowed for character interaction, story development, and other things that enabled me to present the facts in an entertaining manner.

One should not face a writer's block with the mentality of bursting through it. I have found in my own experience that a writer's block is usually due to my mind indicating that it has a problem in 'channeling' the story. One reason might be a re-imagining of certain story points. Another reason however is that there is a problem in where you are at in the story, so you need to look back and find out the problem with the 'journey' that prevents the tale from advancing.

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PostSubject: bus travel in Iberia   bus travel in Iberia Icon_minitimeMarch 8th 2010, 6:46 am

Bus Travel in Iberia



We are driving past nice houses, built by Portuguese
who have spent a life time working in France or Swiss.
Lot of brass and gilded door knockers, made me think
of expensive coffins, the kind used to bury kings and
statesmen, so utterly hideous, they must be glad to be
dead. But I will scoff it is someone’s dream I’m looking
at. Who am I to be a critic? Sometimes dreams should
stay firmly in the other world’s realm, or failing that,
listen to the advice of an architect; mind there aren’t
that many good ones around, it’s all about money.
I’m sitting on a bus on my way to France, it’s the least
expensive way to get there, we are all poor and equal.
I like the journey and there are regular stops for a pee
and something to eat. The landscape we travel though
right now has big boulders strewn about as some giants
of yore have been playing bowls. A signpost tells me we
are nearing Castello Branco, fifty minutes stop for lunch
and stretching of numb legs.
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