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Is the phrase "Once upon a time..."
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Monthly Writing Prompt
For this month's writing prompt write a scene using the following sentence to start;

The streets were deserted. Where was everyone? Where had they all gone?

Writing Tip
Our monthly writing tips are written by our very own TerishD. You can read more in Terish's Blog located in "The Abstractions" area of the forum.

Look Back

When not able to write ahead, it helps to look back. In my case I had written a paragraph ahead of the story. What I needed to do was add a section of exposition (talking) presenting some facts. In going back, I realized that I could insert a section where a 'tour' of the surroundings could be done. This allowed for character interaction, story development, and other things that enabled me to present the facts in an entertaining manner.

One should not face a writer's block with the mentality of bursting through it. I have found in my own experience that a writer's block is usually due to my mind indicating that it has a problem in 'channeling' the story. One reason might be a re-imagining of certain story points. Another reason however is that there is a problem in where you are at in the story, so you need to look back and find out the problem with the 'journey' that prevents the tale from advancing.

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PostSubject: I love you   I love you Icon_minitimeJuly 22nd 2008, 12:26 pm

The heart laughs
I take your hand
Come with me

I want to be always with you
To conquer the world
Your love is good for me

You know me
I am proud of you
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PostSubject: Re: I love you   I love you Icon_minitimeJuly 22nd 2008, 9:01 pm

Simple and sweet! Nice job.
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PostSubject: Reply   I love you Icon_minitimeJuly 23rd 2008, 12:43 am

All right, I believe that you were attempting to slip this one by us. It is a nice set of stanzas, but it lacks consistent meter. I first thought that it was three haikus, but that second stanza really threw that idea out the window.

It did hold to a standard topic. I will grant that.

It really did not come across as a concise use of words. I felt that I could have said the same in prose more succinctly.

It was sweet, and I am certain that the guy you meant them for was very glad to hear such words. As for me, 1 out of 3 means that you could do better.
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PostSubject: Re: I love you   I love you Icon_minitimeJuly 23rd 2008, 4:33 am

Mh i try to do it better Sad I find this poem not so good too. I German the words have more feeling. So i make it better.
I thank you for the long comment i hope i understand you what you want to say to me.

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