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For this month's writing prompt write a scene using the following sentence to start;

The streets were deserted. Where was everyone? Where had they all gone?

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Our monthly writing tips are written by our very own TerishD. You can read more in Terish's Blog located in "The Abstractions" area of the forum.

Look Back

When not able to write ahead, it helps to look back. In my case I had written a paragraph ahead of the story. What I needed to do was add a section of exposition (talking) presenting some facts. In going back, I realized that I could insert a section where a 'tour' of the surroundings could be done. This allowed for character interaction, story development, and other things that enabled me to present the facts in an entertaining manner.

One should not face a writer's block with the mentality of bursting through it. I have found in my own experience that a writer's block is usually due to my mind indicating that it has a problem in 'channeling' the story. One reason might be a re-imagining of certain story points. Another reason however is that there is a problem in where you are at in the story, so you need to look back and find out the problem with the 'journey' that prevents the tale from advancing.

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A friend like you
Hard to find
You have found me.

Proudly on you
Proudly on our friendship
You have belonged to me
You were there always for me

However, we broke
We called it love
I have differently decided
I did not want to love you

Never destroy this connection
The time turn back
Forget and award

I lost you without reason
You do not find me
I love you

Why we?
We did not want this
Actions everything against it.
It was stronger

Love would destroy everything
Never again such a relation
Everything would change

If it was, nevertheless, the best for us
To refrain
Please,
lets the feelings go

They do not go
Demons pursue me
Till the sleep
Do not leave

Say you me:
Do you also feel it?



->A poem about a friendship. From her became love and would have destroyed almost everything. Now I did not want to point with the finger at myself.
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