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Is the phrase "Once upon a time..."
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Monthly Writing Prompt
For this month's writing prompt write a scene using the following sentence to start;

The streets were deserted. Where was everyone? Where had they all gone?

Writing Tip
Our monthly writing tips are written by our very own TerishD. You can read more in Terish's Blog located in "The Abstractions" area of the forum.

Look Back

When not able to write ahead, it helps to look back. In my case I had written a paragraph ahead of the story. What I needed to do was add a section of exposition (talking) presenting some facts. In going back, I realized that I could insert a section where a 'tour' of the surroundings could be done. This allowed for character interaction, story development, and other things that enabled me to present the facts in an entertaining manner.

One should not face a writer's block with the mentality of bursting through it. I have found in my own experience that a writer's block is usually due to my mind indicating that it has a problem in 'channeling' the story. One reason might be a re-imagining of certain story points. Another reason however is that there is a problem in where you are at in the story, so you need to look back and find out the problem with the 'journey' that prevents the tale from advancing.

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Phalen Schuyler

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Phalen Schuyler


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Number of posts : 27
Age : 33
Location : Clarksville, MD
Current Mood : Don't Forget About Me Th_sta10
Registration date : 2008-07-18

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PostSubject: Don't Forget About Me   Don't Forget About Me Icon_minitimeAugust 21st 2008, 2:09 pm

Late night
Changes
Don't forget about me
Moving to different places
They won't accept me
Don't forget about me
Independent
Lonely
Don't forget about me
Bad dreams
Memories
Don't forget about me
Don't want to be left behind
Forgotten
Again
I want to be included
In everything
I want to be remembered
So remember me
Don't forget about me
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PostSubject: Re: Don't Forget About Me   Don't Forget About Me Icon_minitimeAugust 22nd 2008, 1:59 pm

Well-written, nice subject. Though I don't understand what you mean by a few lines.
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PostSubject: Re: Don't Forget About Me   Don't Forget About Me Icon_minitimeSeptember 4th 2008, 9:35 pm

Honestly I don't care for it. It seems repetitive, you have a subject but it gets lost in style.
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