Phalen Schuyler
Number of posts : 27 Age : 33 Location : Clarksville, MD Current Mood : Registration date : 2008-07-18
| Subject: Don't Forget About Me August 21st 2008, 2:09 pm | |
| Late night Changes Don't forget about me Moving to different places They won't accept me Don't forget about me Independent Lonely Don't forget about me Bad dreams Memories Don't forget about me Don't want to be left behind Forgotten Again I want to be included In everything I want to be remembered So remember me Don't forget about me | |
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AliceInWonderland
Number of posts : 44 Location : Germany Current Mood : Registration date : 2008-07-18
| Subject: Re: Don't Forget About Me August 22nd 2008, 1:59 pm | |
| Well-written, nice subject. Though I don't understand what you mean by a few lines. | |
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Kellycakes
Number of posts : 1136 Age : 47 Location : State of Thankfulness! Current Mood : Registration date : 2008-07-17
| Subject: Re: Don't Forget About Me September 4th 2008, 9:35 pm | |
| Honestly I don't care for it. It seems repetitive, you have a subject but it gets lost in style. | |
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