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For this month's writing prompt write a scene using the following sentence to start;

The streets were deserted. Where was everyone? Where had they all gone?

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Look Back

When not able to write ahead, it helps to look back. In my case I had written a paragraph ahead of the story. What I needed to do was add a section of exposition (talking) presenting some facts. In going back, I realized that I could insert a section where a 'tour' of the surroundings could be done. This allowed for character interaction, story development, and other things that enabled me to present the facts in an entertaining manner.

One should not face a writer's block with the mentality of bursting through it. I have found in my own experience that a writer's block is usually due to my mind indicating that it has a problem in 'channeling' the story. One reason might be a re-imagining of certain story points. Another reason however is that there is a problem in where you are at in the story, so you need to look back and find out the problem with the 'journey' that prevents the tale from advancing.

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PostSubject: Eric Lehman Reviews Time Adjusters by Bill Ectric   Eric Lehman Reviews Time Adjusters by Bill Ectric Icon_minitimeJuly 18th 2008, 11:09 pm

I hope it's okay to start with a shameless plug for my book, Time Adjusters and Other Stories. Here is a review by Eric D. Lehman, an English Professor at the University of Bridgeport (CT). This was first published on a website called Empty Mirror Books:

The modern fables that make up Bill Ectric's new collection of stories, Time Adjusters, are difficult to classify, in the best way possible. They seem a comic-book mishmash of science fiction and magical realism, one turn of the screw toward another world. At first, the author paints a suburban landscape where pet baboons chase children through the streets, and we are not sure whether this isn't our world after all. Readers get multiple perspectives, disturbing our sense of reality further, leaving us with small growths on our analytical minds that may or may not be benign.
And then, Mr. Ectric turns the screw one more time for stories like "Time Adjusters," inserting elements like an attacking Neanderthal imported through a time gateway. And yet, this still does not happen in a fantastic world beyond imagination, but in the smiling environs of Insurance Co. Often, the real stories take place in a character's mind, and amidst all this narrative chaos, the reader is led astray. When I read the "The Little Robot," a deceptively simple story about a young boy who uses his robot as a rosary, I had no idea where the story was going. Who knows what could happen — the robot could burst alive or the little boy could transform into a machine. Ectric plays with our expectations, and so when we are left with a sad but powerful story about the human capacity for belief, we are surprised and gratified.

My favorite story in the collection is "Miss Glenly's Dreadful Room." It tells the tale of the relationship between a fourteen year old boy and a sixty-seven year old woman. Miss Glenly has a "dreadful room" in her house, and I had no idea where this could be headed, probably ending with the sweet title character's horrifying death. But when the young narrator pushes through his fears and gives his new friend the keys to conquering her own, I was moved. Ectric had turned me on my head again. These characters were real, and sympathetic, and just like us. We all have dreadful rooms, whether real or imagined, and we all need the support of friends to help us survive them.
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Its quite ok, in fact I encourage it. You seem to have remarkable writing ability. I'm glad you have joined us here at Scribbles.

How many short stories have you written?
How many different books have to put together using your short stories?

Sorry for the questions, but inquiring minds want to know. Or at least one does.
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PostSubject: Re: Eric Lehman Reviews Time Adjusters by Bill Ectric   Eric Lehman Reviews Time Adjusters by Bill Ectric Icon_minitimeAugust 20th 2008, 5:15 pm

Sorry it took me so long to reply. I've been steadily working on a novel, which is almost finished, and it's taken most of my spare time. To answer your question, here is a link to my books.. Beside each book is a list of the stories in each one. Also, you can click here to read 3 of my stories.

Thank you so much for your interest!

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