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Is the phrase "Once upon a time..."
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Monthly Writing Prompt
For this month's writing prompt write a scene using the following sentence to start;

The streets were deserted. Where was everyone? Where had they all gone?

Writing Tip
Our monthly writing tips are written by our very own TerishD. You can read more in Terish's Blog located in "The Abstractions" area of the forum.

Look Back

When not able to write ahead, it helps to look back. In my case I had written a paragraph ahead of the story. What I needed to do was add a section of exposition (talking) presenting some facts. In going back, I realized that I could insert a section where a 'tour' of the surroundings could be done. This allowed for character interaction, story development, and other things that enabled me to present the facts in an entertaining manner.

One should not face a writer's block with the mentality of bursting through it. I have found in my own experience that a writer's block is usually due to my mind indicating that it has a problem in 'channeling' the story. One reason might be a re-imagining of certain story points. Another reason however is that there is a problem in where you are at in the story, so you need to look back and find out the problem with the 'journey' that prevents the tale from advancing.

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PostSubject: Lover's Quake   Lover's Quake Icon_minitimeJuly 18th 2008, 8:18 pm

Lover’s Quake

Lighting the candles, everything unplugged.
Flower petals spread, nothing being worn.
There are no secrets.
A nightstand of oil; drenched with lavender,
The bubbles floating, as the moon ascends.
Yearning for release, a wild fantasy.
By steady breathing; as hours escape.
Bodies are mangled, and lubricated.
As craving eyes tear; smiles dance across lips.
With a warm embrace; a sigh of beauty and trembles are near.
Releases pressure.
In a lover’s quake.
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PostSubject: Re: Lover's Quake   Lover's Quake Icon_minitimeJuly 19th 2008, 7:29 am

This poem really arises images in my head. I can feel the scene, because you're way of writing draws me in. Nice work
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PostSubject: Re: Lover's Quake   Lover's Quake Icon_minitimeJuly 19th 2008, 11:45 pm

Wonderful..Just wonderful!

I can feel every word you write and can see everything that is going on in your poem. Your writing always fascinates me!
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PostSubject: Re: Lover's Quake   Lover's Quake Icon_minitimeJuly 20th 2008, 5:30 pm

Oh I like it so much cat

I Love it
Greets Jenny
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PostSubject: Re: Lover's Quake   Lover's Quake Icon_minitimeJuly 21st 2008, 4:45 pm

I love your use of the word, lubricated. You get big kudos for that.
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