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Monthly Writing Prompt
For this month's writing prompt write a scene using the following sentence to start;

The streets were deserted. Where was everyone? Where had they all gone?

Writing Tip
Our monthly writing tips are written by our very own TerishD. You can read more in Terish's Blog located in "The Abstractions" area of the forum.

Look Back

When not able to write ahead, it helps to look back. In my case I had written a paragraph ahead of the story. What I needed to do was add a section of exposition (talking) presenting some facts. In going back, I realized that I could insert a section where a 'tour' of the surroundings could be done. This allowed for character interaction, story development, and other things that enabled me to present the facts in an entertaining manner.

One should not face a writer's block with the mentality of bursting through it. I have found in my own experience that a writer's block is usually due to my mind indicating that it has a problem in 'channeling' the story. One reason might be a re-imagining of certain story points. Another reason however is that there is a problem in where you are at in the story, so you need to look back and find out the problem with the 'journey' that prevents the tale from advancing.

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John Yamrus

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PostSubject: after work   after work Icon_minitimeSeptember 4th 2008, 9:32 am

after work

i come home,
walk into the kitchen
and throw my wallet
on the counter.

then my pens,
my cards
and finally
my keys,
which
slide along the counter,
spin,
do a little dance
and finally
come to a stop.

some day

so will
i.
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PostSubject: Re: after work   after work Icon_minitimeSeptember 4th 2008, 3:39 pm

I enjoyed reading this. First a thought well, why not writing about everyday life and then... wow... something so ordinary turned into a question going so deep.
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PostSubject: Re: after work   after work Icon_minitimeSeptember 4th 2008, 5:08 pm

i'm glad you "get it". thanks.
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PostSubject: Re: after work   after work Icon_minitimeSeptember 4th 2008, 9:25 pm

I'm really surprised by your style, in a good way. Simple, straight to the point and deep.
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