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Monthly Writing Prompt
For this month's writing prompt write a scene using the following sentence to start;

The streets were deserted. Where was everyone? Where had they all gone?

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Our monthly writing tips are written by our very own TerishD. You can read more in Terish's Blog located in "The Abstractions" area of the forum.

Look Back

When not able to write ahead, it helps to look back. In my case I had written a paragraph ahead of the story. What I needed to do was add a section of exposition (talking) presenting some facts. In going back, I realized that I could insert a section where a 'tour' of the surroundings could be done. This allowed for character interaction, story development, and other things that enabled me to present the facts in an entertaining manner.

One should not face a writer's block with the mentality of bursting through it. I have found in my own experience that a writer's block is usually due to my mind indicating that it has a problem in 'channeling' the story. One reason might be a re-imagining of certain story points. Another reason however is that there is a problem in where you are at in the story, so you need to look back and find out the problem with the 'journey' that prevents the tale from advancing.

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Time of forgetfulness

He had been to my house often likes to come here, stay for a few days,
because of the nature where he can walk along overgrown tracks and
see how life used to be lived before. Now he could not find my house and
called me told me the name of the cafe where he had stopped.

After a meal he went for his walk, but didnĀ“t return and it was getting dark.
we found him under an olive tree he was lost, nothing he knew before
resembled the forest of dread he was in now. It took a while before he knew
me and when he did he cried, the game was up he was slowly succumbing to
Alzheimer. In the morning I drove him back to the town my wife was driving in
his car behind us. He spoke little and when he did mixed the past and present.

When we stopped outside his house he thought I was Dali Lama was flattered
to be in his presence; we arranged for him to go into a home, but before it could
be done he had a lucid moment and cut his life short, as he refused to follow
the lane of the living death, a ghost that had no memories.
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