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Monthly Writing Prompt
For this month's writing prompt write a scene using the following sentence to start;

The streets were deserted. Where was everyone? Where had they all gone?

Writing Tip
Our monthly writing tips are written by our very own TerishD. You can read more in Terish's Blog located in "The Abstractions" area of the forum.

Look Back

When not able to write ahead, it helps to look back. In my case I had written a paragraph ahead of the story. What I needed to do was add a section of exposition (talking) presenting some facts. In going back, I realized that I could insert a section where a 'tour' of the surroundings could be done. This allowed for character interaction, story development, and other things that enabled me to present the facts in an entertaining manner.

One should not face a writer's block with the mentality of bursting through it. I have found in my own experience that a writer's block is usually due to my mind indicating that it has a problem in 'channeling' the story. One reason might be a re-imagining of certain story points. Another reason however is that there is a problem in where you are at in the story, so you need to look back and find out the problem with the 'journey' that prevents the tale from advancing.

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PostSubject: Ennui (The Boredom Song)   Ennui (The Boredom Song) Icon_minitimeAugust 20th 2008, 10:04 pm

Been sitting here
Waiting impatiently
Fading away

Been bored out of my mind
Which is digging
Eating at my thoughts
Which makes no sense
Because I can't think

Been keeping everything
Bottled up inside
But there are some things that you just can't hide
And now I can't wait anymore
I'm sick of sitting still

Been fidgeting
Doodling
Trying to think
Can't keep my attention on anything
There goes my mind
They say that my attention span is alarmingly low
But I act exactly the same as
Everybody else

Been excluded
Been ignored
Been restless
Been bored
Been thinking
But I can't think
Been day-dreaming
But I can't dream
How have you been?
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PostSubject: Reply   Ennui (The Boredom Song) Icon_minitimeAugust 20th 2008, 11:18 pm

Yeah, I know, not a rhyming one. I however am a high school teacher, so I appreciated this poem. You did a good job of catching the mood of a restless student. Well done.
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