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Monthly Writing Prompt
For this month's writing prompt write a scene using the following sentence to start;

The streets were deserted. Where was everyone? Where had they all gone?

Writing Tip
Our monthly writing tips are written by our very own TerishD. You can read more in Terish's Blog located in "The Abstractions" area of the forum.

Look Back

When not able to write ahead, it helps to look back. In my case I had written a paragraph ahead of the story. What I needed to do was add a section of exposition (talking) presenting some facts. In going back, I realized that I could insert a section where a 'tour' of the surroundings could be done. This allowed for character interaction, story development, and other things that enabled me to present the facts in an entertaining manner.

One should not face a writer's block with the mentality of bursting through it. I have found in my own experience that a writer's block is usually due to my mind indicating that it has a problem in 'channeling' the story. One reason might be a re-imagining of certain story points. Another reason however is that there is a problem in where you are at in the story, so you need to look back and find out the problem with the 'journey' that prevents the tale from advancing.

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PostSubject: The Way I Want To Make You Feel   The Way I Want To Make You Feel Icon_minitimeJuly 18th 2008, 3:45 am

I want to make you feel special
I want to make you feel new
I want to make you feel loved
With everything I do

I want to hold you close when you're sad
I want to wipe the tears from your face
Every time we are together
I want that it seems like the perfect place

My eyes light up when you enter a room
I smile when we are together
No matter how bad things are
You always make them better

I love the way you kiss me
The way you hold me tight
I love the way you touch me
I want to be with you all night

I want to make you laugh
For absolutely no reason at all
I love how no matter what I do
I want to be there to catch you when you fall

I just want you to know
That even though we sometimes fight
I will always love you
No matter what, day or night
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PostSubject: Re: The Way I Want To Make You Feel   The Way I Want To Make You Feel Icon_minitimeJuly 21st 2008, 2:40 pm

Very cute. Sweet, innocent and obviously in love. I know this isn't the critique section but you know I'm going to tell you what I think. There is a couple lines:

Quote :
I love how no matter what I do
I want to be there to catch you when you fall

I don't know if its a tense jump or what. But they they don't go together, maybe a rearrangement of words or something? I'm not sure something doesn't seem quite right even though they rhyme pretty well. Hmm, what to do..
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