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Monthly Writing Prompt
For this month's writing prompt write a scene using the following sentence to start;

The streets were deserted. Where was everyone? Where had they all gone?

Writing Tip
Our monthly writing tips are written by our very own TerishD. You can read more in Terish's Blog located in "The Abstractions" area of the forum.

Look Back

When not able to write ahead, it helps to look back. In my case I had written a paragraph ahead of the story. What I needed to do was add a section of exposition (talking) presenting some facts. In going back, I realized that I could insert a section where a 'tour' of the surroundings could be done. This allowed for character interaction, story development, and other things that enabled me to present the facts in an entertaining manner.

One should not face a writer's block with the mentality of bursting through it. I have found in my own experience that a writer's block is usually due to my mind indicating that it has a problem in 'channeling' the story. One reason might be a re-imagining of certain story points. Another reason however is that there is a problem in where you are at in the story, so you need to look back and find out the problem with the 'journey' that prevents the tale from advancing.

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PostSubject: Night of Love   Night of Love Icon_minitimeAugust 16th 2008, 10:25 pm

Lying your tender arms around me
Naked skin turns and moves
We fall onto silk pillows
I don't want to miss your embrace

We feel our bodies, deep sensual
It awakes a need that sleeps in me
I want to taste your love
Overcasting hot skin with wild kisses

Our shadows move back and forth on the wall
Full of expectation, we want more
Hearts are lost in desire
With the light of a thousand twinkling candle

I want you lock, stock and barrel; I want all of you
I cover you with tenderness so you won't freeze
Pull you to me, enfold you with the rapture of the night
Do what you want to me, whatever you conceived in your dreams

Hot ablaze flames rise in the darkness
Our bodies entangle and dancing in the moonlight
Overturning our voices in pure passion
And abode the most beautifully silent hours

I'm deep in you, your sweet body quakes in ecstasy
My body recipicate your lust
I hold you tight, my hands buried in your hair
We experience the bottomless variety of love

We succumb without orientation in our passion
Stroking each other, caressing, flying to heaven
A shower relaxes muscles momentarily
dripping, dropping, we're holding even tighter

Lets fall back into the soft silk pillows
A kiss from you and I don't want to know what you're thinking about
I tell you, that I don't want to miss you
While dreaming, we sleep and await the day
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PostSubject: Re: Night of Love   Night of Love Icon_minitimeAugust 17th 2008, 2:22 pm

A beautiful poem. I really enjoyed reading it.
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