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Monthly Writing Prompt
For this month's writing prompt write a scene using the following sentence to start;

The streets were deserted. Where was everyone? Where had they all gone?

Writing Tip
Our monthly writing tips are written by our very own TerishD. You can read more in Terish's Blog located in "The Abstractions" area of the forum.

Look Back

When not able to write ahead, it helps to look back. In my case I had written a paragraph ahead of the story. What I needed to do was add a section of exposition (talking) presenting some facts. In going back, I realized that I could insert a section where a 'tour' of the surroundings could be done. This allowed for character interaction, story development, and other things that enabled me to present the facts in an entertaining manner.

One should not face a writer's block with the mentality of bursting through it. I have found in my own experience that a writer's block is usually due to my mind indicating that it has a problem in 'channeling' the story. One reason might be a re-imagining of certain story points. Another reason however is that there is a problem in where you are at in the story, so you need to look back and find out the problem with the 'journey' that prevents the tale from advancing.

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PostSubject: Breathtaking Night   Breathtaking Night Icon_minitimeAugust 12th 2008, 3:54 am

A light
Lights up the dark street
Shimmering like the moonlight
Above a breathtaking starry sky
One star brighter than the other

Hand in hand we're walking
Through the lighting street
With your beauty
You cast a spell over me

A warm rain falls down
Falls down on our bodies
Our clothes soaked with rain
Let us feel the wetness on our skin

,ore in love than ever
For each other always care
We're walking in the night
You, me and the light
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