Snacker
Number of posts : 818 Age : 39 Location : Stuck in Michigan Current Mood : Registration date : 2008-07-17
| Subject: A Star In My Heart August 12th 2008, 3:39 am | |
| I miss you so much I wish just one touch Now in this moment from you That it is why I´m talking to you...
I have a pretty dream Of you and me Standing together now and forever
To stand in the sky near stars and moon To stand in heaven near light to be warm My head on your shoulder - a look in your eyes I wish I could say I´m not fantasy´s
In the middle of my heart, you are shine In the middle of my mind, you are always mine
Have you ever loved somebody - just like me love you? Have you ever felt a heart in yours? Do you know what I mean? I´m just loving you...
I need no one else to be happy in life and death I need no one else to stay in heaven on earth You on my side, it´s all that I need You in my life My sunbeam My liberty
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AliceInWonderland
Number of posts : 44 Location : Germany Current Mood : Registration date : 2008-07-18
| Subject: Re: A Star In My Heart August 12th 2008, 11:51 am | |
| Your love poems are always so nice. I'm not that good at writing them, to me it is easier to write something sad. But maybe you can try another type of poem, too. I think it is always challenging to try yourself on a new topic. | |
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Antipodi
Number of posts : 4 Age : 73 Location : DownUnder Registration date : 2008-08-10
| Subject: Re: A Star In My Heart August 15th 2008, 7:20 am | |
| Wonderful verbal images in verse an excellent write | |
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Snacker
Number of posts : 818 Age : 39 Location : Stuck in Michigan Current Mood : Registration date : 2008-07-17
| Subject: Re: A Star In My Heart August 15th 2008, 3:35 pm | |
| @ Alice: I will try to write something else than love poems, but it seems that those kind of poems are just the best for me. But thank you for your opinion, which I totally agree too.
@ Antipodi: Thank you. Means a lot to me to get a comment like that. | |
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