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Is the phrase "Once upon a time..."
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Monthly Writing Prompt
For this month's writing prompt write a scene using the following sentence to start;

The streets were deserted. Where was everyone? Where had they all gone?

Writing Tip
Our monthly writing tips are written by our very own TerishD. You can read more in Terish's Blog located in "The Abstractions" area of the forum.

Look Back

When not able to write ahead, it helps to look back. In my case I had written a paragraph ahead of the story. What I needed to do was add a section of exposition (talking) presenting some facts. In going back, I realized that I could insert a section where a 'tour' of the surroundings could be done. This allowed for character interaction, story development, and other things that enabled me to present the facts in an entertaining manner.

One should not face a writer's block with the mentality of bursting through it. I have found in my own experience that a writer's block is usually due to my mind indicating that it has a problem in 'channeling' the story. One reason might be a re-imagining of certain story points. Another reason however is that there is a problem in where you are at in the story, so you need to look back and find out the problem with the 'journey' that prevents the tale from advancing.

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PostSubject: A Star In My Heart   A Star In My Heart Icon_minitimeAugust 12th 2008, 3:39 am

I miss you so much
I wish just one touch
Now in this moment from you
That it is why I´m talking to you...

I have a pretty dream
Of you and me
Standing together now and forever

To stand in the sky near stars and moon
To stand in heaven near light to be warm
My head on your shoulder - a look in your eyes
I wish I could say
I´m not fantasy´s

In the middle of my heart, you are shine
In the middle of my mind, you are always mine

Have you ever loved somebody - just like me love you?
Have you ever felt a heart in yours?
Do you know what I mean?
I´m just loving you...

I need no one else to be happy in life and death
I need no one else to stay in heaven on earth
You on my side, it´s all that I need
You in my life
My sunbeam
My liberty


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PostSubject: Re: A Star In My Heart   A Star In My Heart Icon_minitimeAugust 12th 2008, 11:51 am

Your love poems are always so nice. I'm not that good at writing them, to me it is easier to write something sad. But maybe you can try another type of poem, too.
I think it is always challenging to try yourself on a new topic.
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PostSubject: Re: A Star In My Heart   A Star In My Heart Icon_minitimeAugust 15th 2008, 7:20 am

Wonderful verbal images in verse an excellent write
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PostSubject: Re: A Star In My Heart   A Star In My Heart Icon_minitimeAugust 15th 2008, 3:35 pm

@ Alice: I will try to write something else than love poems, but it seems that those kind of poems are just the best for me. But thank you for your opinion, which I totally agree too.

@ Antipodi: Thank you. Means a lot to me to get a comment like that.
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