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Is the phrase "Once upon a time..."
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Monthly Writing Prompt
For this month's writing prompt write a scene using the following sentence to start;

The streets were deserted. Where was everyone? Where had they all gone?

Writing Tip
Our monthly writing tips are written by our very own TerishD. You can read more in Terish's Blog located in "The Abstractions" area of the forum.

Look Back

When not able to write ahead, it helps to look back. In my case I had written a paragraph ahead of the story. What I needed to do was add a section of exposition (talking) presenting some facts. In going back, I realized that I could insert a section where a 'tour' of the surroundings could be done. This allowed for character interaction, story development, and other things that enabled me to present the facts in an entertaining manner.

One should not face a writer's block with the mentality of bursting through it. I have found in my own experience that a writer's block is usually due to my mind indicating that it has a problem in 'channeling' the story. One reason might be a re-imagining of certain story points. Another reason however is that there is a problem in where you are at in the story, so you need to look back and find out the problem with the 'journey' that prevents the tale from advancing.

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PostSubject: Silent Echoes   Silent Echoes Icon_minitimeJuly 21st 2008, 12:06 am

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The voices continue all sounds are jumbled.
She’s exhausted and can only mumble.
The words come easy but he can’t hear.
What’s she’s saying is she wish she were there.
To kiss his lips, to hold him close;
To wipe the tears is what she wants the most;
To repair his heart and cradle his soul;
To prove her love and lift his load;
To stop his tears, to breathe him in;
To conquer fears; to live again.
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PostSubject: Re: Silent Echoes   Silent Echoes Icon_minitimeJuly 21st 2008, 6:45 pm

great poem can really feel the poem .....
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PostSubject: Re: Silent Echoes   Silent Echoes Icon_minitimeJuly 22nd 2008, 5:31 am

Oh ;( The Love... Very nice Smile
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