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Is the phrase "Once upon a time..."
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Monthly Writing Prompt
For this month's writing prompt write a scene using the following sentence to start;

The streets were deserted. Where was everyone? Where had they all gone?

Writing Tip
Our monthly writing tips are written by our very own TerishD. You can read more in Terish's Blog located in "The Abstractions" area of the forum.

Look Back

When not able to write ahead, it helps to look back. In my case I had written a paragraph ahead of the story. What I needed to do was add a section of exposition (talking) presenting some facts. In going back, I realized that I could insert a section where a 'tour' of the surroundings could be done. This allowed for character interaction, story development, and other things that enabled me to present the facts in an entertaining manner.

One should not face a writer's block with the mentality of bursting through it. I have found in my own experience that a writer's block is usually due to my mind indicating that it has a problem in 'channeling' the story. One reason might be a re-imagining of certain story points. Another reason however is that there is a problem in where you are at in the story, so you need to look back and find out the problem with the 'journey' that prevents the tale from advancing.

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PostSubject: Lord of the Rings   Lord of the Rings Icon_minitimeJune 1st 2009, 6:47 am

I loved the films, and for educational purposes the book is great, but I was a bit bored and never made it past the first part of the second book. Its very realistic, but having to read 6+ pages at a time just filled with description of their course made my head numb.

Is it just me who felt this?

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PostSubject: Re: Lord of the Rings   Lord of the Rings Icon_minitimeJune 1st 2009, 7:58 am

Both the books and the movies were far too drawn out for my taste. Though I'm a bit opposite of yourself. If finished reading all the books, but only made it halfway through movie one and two and somehow managed to watch the last one all the way to the end.

There is something however to be said for how much detail and back story was created. Few other authors have even come close to creating so fully another world.
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PostSubject: Reply   Lord of the Rings Icon_minitimeJune 1st 2009, 8:10 am

I enjoyed the description for a number of reasons. The most basic was simply to have it present, as so many authors forget that it is their job to paint in the background and often the foreground. It made me accept JRR Tolkien as the actual author, and not have me feel that I deserved some of the honor as with modern authors that force me to assume certain details as present (forcing me to do the work of completing the scenery).

Another good part about the description was that it let me know that the author cared for his world. He did not rush through the story as if he had a job to do. He took the time to imagine his world as having substance beyond the sets where action occurred. It made me accept the world of Middle Earth as real.

Finally, those six pages treated me, the reader, with respect. JRR Tolkien did not treat me as a simpleton, but honored me with a full description as someone who could appreciate subtle details. That had me accept the author as someone that appreciated his readers, and I gave those pages the respect they deserved.

Let me once again tell you the story of my children and my painting. I will be sitting down painting a metal figure, and my children will come in and watch. One will then ask, "Daddy, when will you be done?" To which I will reply, "I hope that I never get done. Painting is fun, and if I finish then the fun will be over. I don't want the fun to be over, so I hope that it takes a very long time before I am done." The same should be with a story. Reading (and writing) should be fun. You should thus not be desiring for the story to rush to its conclusion. Enjoy reading (and writing) those descriptive passages. Enjoy reading (and writing) all the details of the story. The longer it takes to finish, the longer the fun lasts.
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PostSubject: Re: Lord of the Rings   Lord of the Rings Icon_minitimeJune 1st 2009, 9:36 am

They're just a bit hard to follow for me, although I'll stand by what I said about them being quite educational, as I haven't much experience with countryside when I read it.

I admire the amount of effort he put into the info about Hobbits at the beginning, but it tired me out having to read it all before we got into the story.

The books were a bit drawn out, its not that I lost interest on purpose, sometimes in the middle of long novels I get distracted by other things and need to return to them a few days later, but I just never bothered with LOTR and started reading something else. I lost the passion for reading them, maybe because I saw the films before reading the books I don't know.

The Hobbit though was my fav, and I will be reading that again one day Very Happy
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