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Monthly Writing Prompt
For this month's writing prompt write a scene using the following sentence to start;

The streets were deserted. Where was everyone? Where had they all gone?

Writing Tip
Our monthly writing tips are written by our very own TerishD. You can read more in Terish's Blog located in "The Abstractions" area of the forum.

Look Back

When not able to write ahead, it helps to look back. In my case I had written a paragraph ahead of the story. What I needed to do was add a section of exposition (talking) presenting some facts. In going back, I realized that I could insert a section where a 'tour' of the surroundings could be done. This allowed for character interaction, story development, and other things that enabled me to present the facts in an entertaining manner.

One should not face a writer's block with the mentality of bursting through it. I have found in my own experience that a writer's block is usually due to my mind indicating that it has a problem in 'channeling' the story. One reason might be a re-imagining of certain story points. Another reason however is that there is a problem in where you are at in the story, so you need to look back and find out the problem with the 'journey' that prevents the tale from advancing.

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Saphira

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Location : Münster, Germany
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PostSubject: Let me !!!!   Let me !!!! Icon_minitimeJuly 20th 2008, 3:40 am

I am fed up with it so so
Always this grin.
Everything put on.

You know my history?
Well, gets n biscuit.
Do you listen to me, actually?
Do I talk against a wall?

Have you lost your brain on the way?

I hold you for machines.
overnight to all events forget.
Always of this cheerfulness
i must vomit

And this everlasting everybody is okay getue.

You have Tomaten on the eyes.
if everything finds fantastically

I thought you are my solution
rather you are my problem

Do you have pity?
I do not need this!
Not from you...

Passes where the pepper grows.
I go alone

There I am snail house

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PostSubject: Re: Let me !!!!   Let me !!!! Icon_minitimeJuly 21st 2008, 2:29 pm

I need help with this one. I'm not sure I understand what you are saying.

Gets n biscuit?
I hold you for machines?

Can you tell me what you are meaning to say?
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PostSubject: Re: Let me !!!!   Let me !!!! Icon_minitimeJuly 22nd 2008, 2:21 pm

yeah for sure Smile
we say in german : kriegts n keks
So i english: you get n biscuit
it means: As ironic ones. One holds them for silly. Do you know what i mean

And the other one: i mean they have no feelings like machines

I hope you can understand me sorry for these mistakes ^^
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