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Monthly Writing Prompt
For this month's writing prompt write a scene using the following sentence to start;

The streets were deserted. Where was everyone? Where had they all gone?

Writing Tip
Our monthly writing tips are written by our very own TerishD. You can read more in Terish's Blog located in "The Abstractions" area of the forum.

Look Back

When not able to write ahead, it helps to look back. In my case I had written a paragraph ahead of the story. What I needed to do was add a section of exposition (talking) presenting some facts. In going back, I realized that I could insert a section where a 'tour' of the surroundings could be done. This allowed for character interaction, story development, and other things that enabled me to present the facts in an entertaining manner.

One should not face a writer's block with the mentality of bursting through it. I have found in my own experience that a writer's block is usually due to my mind indicating that it has a problem in 'channeling' the story. One reason might be a re-imagining of certain story points. Another reason however is that there is a problem in where you are at in the story, so you need to look back and find out the problem with the 'journey' that prevents the tale from advancing.

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PostSubject: You are....   You are.... Icon_minitimeJuly 19th 2008, 7:25 am

You're the lifeline I cut
You're the drop that failed the water butt
You're the match that I lose
You're the partner I'd choose
You're like winning in the lottery
after thousands of blanks
You're the only "right" in a communist country
You're a wolf in the wood
You're a demand I can't fulfil

I'm the fashion label that lost its designer
I'm a house without a foundation
I'm a theory without supporters
I'm a pendant without a chain:

Without you
I'm nothing
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PostSubject: Re: You are....   You are.... Icon_minitimeJuly 19th 2008, 5:40 pm

Wow that is a beautiful poem. It reads very smoothly. Great work Alice.
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