HYdraMStar
Number of posts : 1170 Age : 45 Location : Charlotte, NC Current Mood : Registration date : 2008-07-20
| Subject: I Cannot Write Long Poetry Anymore November 4th 2008, 1:56 am | |
| I Cannot Write Long Poetry Anymore by Hydra M. Star
I cannot write long poetry anymore No matter how much passion Or sorrow Or rage I put into them The words simply will not Fill up a page I cannot write long poetry anymore But I know I have not run out of things to say It is just that what I have to say Takes up such little space. | |
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Urs
Number of posts : 569 Location : Corner of Insane Ave & Stupid St. in the State of Denial Current Mood : Registration date : 2008-09-23
| Subject: Re: I Cannot Write Long Poetry Anymore November 4th 2008, 11:04 pm | |
| This just made me laugh... thanks for sharing this. | |
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Leaka
Number of posts : 334 Age : 32 Location : I'm one of the voices in your mind Current Mood : Registration date : 2008-09-25
| Subject: Re: I Cannot Write Long Poetry Anymore November 5th 2008, 2:40 am | |
| This is kinda of funny and cooky. And I like it, but at the same time I dislike it. I really don't like how people write about what they cannot do anymore. It isn't about what you cannot do. Its about what you can do. But other then that I think this is funny and cooky. And kinda crazy. Good job. | |
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John Yamrus
Number of posts : 129 Registration date : 2008-09-04
| Subject: Re: I Cannot Write Long Poetry Anymore November 5th 2008, 4:00 pm | |
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HYdraMStar
Number of posts : 1170 Age : 45 Location : Charlotte, NC Current Mood : Registration date : 2008-07-20
| Subject: Re: I Cannot Write Long Poetry Anymore November 5th 2008, 7:24 pm | |
| I'm glad you guess enjoyed it and I take is as a great complement that I made you laugh Urs. We need more of that in the world right now. And yes, Leaka it's meant more or less in a cooky way and not really a statement on what I can't or want to do. | |
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Kellycakes
Number of posts : 1136 Age : 46 Location : State of Thankfulness! Current Mood : Registration date : 2008-07-17
| Subject: Re: I Cannot Write Long Poetry Anymore November 10th 2008, 2:44 am | |
| It didn't make me laugh at all. Its more or less informational to the poet. Or at least that is the way I've read it. Its has a different feel from all your other pieces and that is why I enjoyed it so much because its a change from what I've seen from you. So often we write and expect things to turn out one way, but they come out totally different and poetry isn't an exception to this medium.
Nice job. | |
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