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Is the phrase "Once upon a time..."
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Monthly Writing Prompt
For this month's writing prompt write a scene using the following sentence to start;

The streets were deserted. Where was everyone? Where had they all gone?

Writing Tip
Our monthly writing tips are written by our very own TerishD. You can read more in Terish's Blog located in "The Abstractions" area of the forum.

Look Back

When not able to write ahead, it helps to look back. In my case I had written a paragraph ahead of the story. What I needed to do was add a section of exposition (talking) presenting some facts. In going back, I realized that I could insert a section where a 'tour' of the surroundings could be done. This allowed for character interaction, story development, and other things that enabled me to present the facts in an entertaining manner.

One should not face a writer's block with the mentality of bursting through it. I have found in my own experience that a writer's block is usually due to my mind indicating that it has a problem in 'channeling' the story. One reason might be a re-imagining of certain story points. Another reason however is that there is a problem in where you are at in the story, so you need to look back and find out the problem with the 'journey' that prevents the tale from advancing.

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PostSubject: Vibrating Rapture   Vibrating Rapture Icon_minitimeJuly 18th 2008, 8:14 pm

Rapture

There was quiet undertone,
fingertips brushed against skin.
Shivers and vibrations,
caused fires within.
Glances into each others eyes,
With the meeting of moist lips.
Hair fell across shoulders,
With movement of hips.
There was a forfeit of rapture,
as he pawed at her backside.
Euphoric of heaven,
no sweet touch denied.
Bodies influenced with loves sweat,
obliging each others needs.
Relinquishment of breath,
and lust’s hunger feeds.
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PostSubject: Re: Vibrating Rapture   Vibrating Rapture Icon_minitimeJuly 19th 2008, 6:17 am

excellent love poem you can feel the love....
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