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Is the phrase "Once upon a time..."
Overused
“i really don’t drink much,” Empty33%“i really don’t drink much,” Empty
 33% [ 1 ]
Underused
“i really don’t drink much,” Empty67%“i really don’t drink much,” Empty
 67% [ 2 ]
Total Votes : 3
Monthly Writing Prompt
For this month's writing prompt write a scene using the following sentence to start;

The streets were deserted. Where was everyone? Where had they all gone?

Writing Tip
Our monthly writing tips are written by our very own TerishD. You can read more in Terish's Blog located in "The Abstractions" area of the forum.

Look Back

When not able to write ahead, it helps to look back. In my case I had written a paragraph ahead of the story. What I needed to do was add a section of exposition (talking) presenting some facts. In going back, I realized that I could insert a section where a 'tour' of the surroundings could be done. This allowed for character interaction, story development, and other things that enabled me to present the facts in an entertaining manner.

One should not face a writer's block with the mentality of bursting through it. I have found in my own experience that a writer's block is usually due to my mind indicating that it has a problem in 'channeling' the story. One reason might be a re-imagining of certain story points. Another reason however is that there is a problem in where you are at in the story, so you need to look back and find out the problem with the 'journey' that prevents the tale from advancing.

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John Yamrus

“i really don’t drink much,” ScribbleSuperr



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Number of posts : 129
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PostSubject: “i really don’t drink much,”   “i really don’t drink much,” Icon_minitimeOctober 27th 2008, 1:42 pm

“i really don’t drink much,”

he said,

“not like i used to, anyway.
but when i do,
it’s tequila.

straight.

i don’t do shots
like some crazy kid.

i’m smarter than
that.

i just sit there
and sip.

some days
when my cousin comes
to visit -

especially in the summer -

we’ll grab a bottle and some cigars
and sit out in the yard
all afternoon.

sometimes
we don’t even say a word.

we’ll just
sit there
and sip.”

you’ve got to admire that
in a man…

the ability to
relax
and ignore
approaching doom.
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Skwerly

“i really don’t drink much,” Scribbler-1
Skwerly


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Number of posts : 79
Age : 49
Location : Yucaipa, CA
Current Mood : “i really don’t drink much,” Th_tha10
Registration date : 2009-06-21

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PostSubject: Re: “i really don’t drink much,”   “i really don’t drink much,” Icon_minitimeDecember 2nd 2009, 8:47 pm

I LOVE IT! That, in my opinion, is a great premise to a cool short story. I like the character already haha!
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