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Monthly Writing Prompt
For this month's writing prompt write a scene using the following sentence to start;

The streets were deserted. Where was everyone? Where had they all gone?

Writing Tip
Our monthly writing tips are written by our very own TerishD. You can read more in Terish's Blog located in "The Abstractions" area of the forum.

Look Back

When not able to write ahead, it helps to look back. In my case I had written a paragraph ahead of the story. What I needed to do was add a section of exposition (talking) presenting some facts. In going back, I realized that I could insert a section where a 'tour' of the surroundings could be done. This allowed for character interaction, story development, and other things that enabled me to present the facts in an entertaining manner.

One should not face a writer's block with the mentality of bursting through it. I have found in my own experience that a writer's block is usually due to my mind indicating that it has a problem in 'channeling' the story. One reason might be a re-imagining of certain story points. Another reason however is that there is a problem in where you are at in the story, so you need to look back and find out the problem with the 'journey' that prevents the tale from advancing.

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Location : Münster, Germany
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PostSubject: Be lucky...   Be lucky... Icon_minitimeJuly 18th 2008, 10:52 am

Up to the moon
and further
As far as you are able

Be only
Make what you want
No bad words
Only the stars catch
Stars pursue

Dreams realize
Laugh at itself
Be glad,
to experience this wonderful world

without in hatred and pain.
Eyes close
and feel simply good

Not always see
the bad one
Mistakes help.

Bad mood brings us farther
Let the sun shine.
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PostSubject: Re: Be lucky...   Be lucky... Icon_minitimeJuly 18th 2008, 11:26 pm

Very nice again its like one negative verse, then a positive verse and it goes on throughout the entire poem. Good I didn't have to wait till the end to get the twist. Keep sharing, this is beautiful because the positives outweigh the negatives.
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PostSubject: Re: Be lucky...   Be lucky... Icon_minitimeJuly 22nd 2008, 2:28 pm

you know: i love the negative verses xD
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