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Is the phrase "Once upon a time..."
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Monthly Writing Prompt
For this month's writing prompt write a scene using the following sentence to start;

The streets were deserted. Where was everyone? Where had they all gone?

Writing Tip
Our monthly writing tips are written by our very own TerishD. You can read more in Terish's Blog located in "The Abstractions" area of the forum.

Look Back

When not able to write ahead, it helps to look back. In my case I had written a paragraph ahead of the story. What I needed to do was add a section of exposition (talking) presenting some facts. In going back, I realized that I could insert a section where a 'tour' of the surroundings could be done. This allowed for character interaction, story development, and other things that enabled me to present the facts in an entertaining manner.

One should not face a writer's block with the mentality of bursting through it. I have found in my own experience that a writer's block is usually due to my mind indicating that it has a problem in 'channeling' the story. One reason might be a re-imagining of certain story points. Another reason however is that there is a problem in where you are at in the story, so you need to look back and find out the problem with the 'journey' that prevents the tale from advancing.

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Saphira

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Saphira


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Number of posts : 124
Age : 35
Location : Münster, Germany
Registration date : 2008-07-18

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PostSubject: Its over now   Its over now Icon_minitimeJuly 18th 2008, 10:32 am

Your poems and letters have
touched my heart
I was your lighthouse
and you my ship

However,
this is a past
Today the history have an end
It hurts so

You are not the one,
who accepts my love.
You are not the one,
who stands on my side.
You are not the one ,
who misses me in the evening.
You are not the one,
who wants me

You are not you
I am not I

I go alone
Without you
I get no air
I surrender.

You are with me
forever
I miss you !
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PostSubject: Re: Its over now   Its over now Icon_minitimeJuly 18th 2008, 11:18 pm

I love the twist at the end. You say how much you love him, in the middle you surrender to letting him go, in the end you miss him more then the breath you no longer have. Very nicely written.
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PostSubject: Re: Its over now   Its over now Icon_minitimeJuly 19th 2008, 6:13 am

Yes very great poem....
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Number of posts : 124
Age : 35
Location : Münster, Germany
Registration date : 2008-07-18

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PostSubject: Re: Its over now   Its over now Icon_minitimeJuly 22nd 2008, 2:24 pm

Thank you Smile I am so happy that you like my poems
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