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Is the phrase "Once upon a time..."
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Monthly Writing Prompt
For this month's writing prompt write a scene using the following sentence to start;

The streets were deserted. Where was everyone? Where had they all gone?

Writing Tip
Our monthly writing tips are written by our very own TerishD. You can read more in Terish's Blog located in "The Abstractions" area of the forum.

Look Back

When not able to write ahead, it helps to look back. In my case I had written a paragraph ahead of the story. What I needed to do was add a section of exposition (talking) presenting some facts. In going back, I realized that I could insert a section where a 'tour' of the surroundings could be done. This allowed for character interaction, story development, and other things that enabled me to present the facts in an entertaining manner.

One should not face a writer's block with the mentality of bursting through it. I have found in my own experience that a writer's block is usually due to my mind indicating that it has a problem in 'channeling' the story. One reason might be a re-imagining of certain story points. Another reason however is that there is a problem in where you are at in the story, so you need to look back and find out the problem with the 'journey' that prevents the tale from advancing.

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PostSubject: dunno   dunno Icon_minitimeSeptember 17th 2008, 9:29 am

dunno

got no answers
got no questions
got no whys
and got no wherefores

all i got
is me

me
and the poem
and this paper sitting in front of me

and what,
my friend,
have
you?
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PostSubject: Re: dunno   dunno Icon_minitimeSeptember 18th 2008, 9:34 am

Hello John Yamrus. I really like the question that this poem poses at the end.
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PostSubject: Re: dunno   dunno Icon_minitimeSeptember 19th 2008, 8:52 am

hahahaha I liked your poem very much John.... (and I'm not into poetry) I liked it so much that I decided to answer your question.....

don't laugh please.... I don't think it rhymes or anything similar but I've had fun doing it and I'm posting it here.... (if you don't like it, please let me know and I'll remove post)

I’ve got the answers
I’ve got no questions
I’ve got the whens
The wheres and the whys
I’ve got the rhymes

All I’ve got is you
You and yours

You and the world
A world of paper
A world of laughter
A world of bones

I’m me
I am god



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PostSubject: Re: dunno   dunno Icon_minitimeSeptember 19th 2008, 9:11 am

nicely done! thank you for sharing it with me. and as for rhyming...rhyme is a crutch for the uninspired. and i'm glad you liked my poem. really glad. let me tell you a story...about 2 years ago i did a book signing/reading at a coffee shop. it was sponsored by this poetry group...a bunch of self-styled "literary types". 60 or so of them. well, i did the reading and rec'd polite applause...well, after the reading i sold not one book...zero. no books...to the literary types, that is...but for the workers at the shop...the waitresses and waiters and the counter people...all but one of them bought books. those are my readers and i'm damned proud of that.
thanks.
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PostSubject: Re: dunno   dunno Icon_minitimeSeptember 19th 2008, 9:15 am

hahahah well... I'm glad your work is not considered part of the "great masters" or whatever these people are called... they're usually boring in my opinion. everything is measured there.... I'm not into numbers..
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