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Monthly Writing Prompt
For this month's writing prompt write a scene using the following sentence to start;

The streets were deserted. Where was everyone? Where had they all gone?

Writing Tip
Our monthly writing tips are written by our very own TerishD. You can read more in Terish's Blog located in "The Abstractions" area of the forum.

Look Back

When not able to write ahead, it helps to look back. In my case I had written a paragraph ahead of the story. What I needed to do was add a section of exposition (talking) presenting some facts. In going back, I realized that I could insert a section where a 'tour' of the surroundings could be done. This allowed for character interaction, story development, and other things that enabled me to present the facts in an entertaining manner.

One should not face a writer's block with the mentality of bursting through it. I have found in my own experience that a writer's block is usually due to my mind indicating that it has a problem in 'channeling' the story. One reason might be a re-imagining of certain story points. Another reason however is that there is a problem in where you are at in the story, so you need to look back and find out the problem with the 'journey' that prevents the tale from advancing.

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PostSubject: a snake speaks out   a snake speaks out Icon_minitimeDecember 27th 2017, 5:44 am

A snake speaks out

There I was
curled up in the morning sun
warming my cold body,
when this person
came along and nearly stepped on me
So I bit him hard.
He ran screaming to
The village
his foot was swollen
but I`m glad he survived
although, it was not my intention.
Later when villagers came to kill me
I slithered away.
Caught and swallowed a rabbit
which is my right?
And went to sleep in a hollow
of an old oak.
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