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Is the phrase "Once upon a time..."
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Monthly Writing Prompt
For this month's writing prompt write a scene using the following sentence to start;

The streets were deserted. Where was everyone? Where had they all gone?

Writing Tip
Our monthly writing tips are written by our very own TerishD. You can read more in Terish's Blog located in "The Abstractions" area of the forum.

Look Back

When not able to write ahead, it helps to look back. In my case I had written a paragraph ahead of the story. What I needed to do was add a section of exposition (talking) presenting some facts. In going back, I realized that I could insert a section where a 'tour' of the surroundings could be done. This allowed for character interaction, story development, and other things that enabled me to present the facts in an entertaining manner.

One should not face a writer's block with the mentality of bursting through it. I have found in my own experience that a writer's block is usually due to my mind indicating that it has a problem in 'channeling' the story. One reason might be a re-imagining of certain story points. Another reason however is that there is a problem in where you are at in the story, so you need to look back and find out the problem with the 'journey' that prevents the tale from advancing.

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PostSubject: thoughtless with truth   thoughtless with truth Icon_minitimeSeptember 14th 2008, 2:49 pm

I sit waiting for an epiphainein moment,
holding on to rusted railings and
the arms of chairs in coffee bars.
Clammy hands grip with vengeance to damp fabric,
lashing out with kicks at past advice and
failed advances (in to heaven).
I started convulsing with bottles and solvents
but it was the asthma that did it,
stopping chest muscles from working; pulse, pulse, pulsing
then fasten around my lungs to contract.
I didn't drink for a month after that.

Now I'm drinking whiskey
and thinking back
to the blood, sick, limbs and fat
twisted in a hospital bed.
Waking up to doctors stare
and the pinnacle moment of realisation
when they take out the drip
and plug the soul in.
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PostSubject: Re: thoughtless with truth   thoughtless with truth Icon_minitimeSeptember 15th 2008, 5:19 pm

Wow, very powerful and an interesting take and approach to the subject matter.
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