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For this month's writing prompt write a scene using the following sentence to start;

The streets were deserted. Where was everyone? Where had they all gone?

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Our monthly writing tips are written by our very own TerishD. You can read more in Terish's Blog located in "The Abstractions" area of the forum.

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When not able to write ahead, it helps to look back. In my case I had written a paragraph ahead of the story. What I needed to do was add a section of exposition (talking) presenting some facts. In going back, I realized that I could insert a section where a 'tour' of the surroundings could be done. This allowed for character interaction, story development, and other things that enabled me to present the facts in an entertaining manner.

One should not face a writer's block with the mentality of bursting through it. I have found in my own experience that a writer's block is usually due to my mind indicating that it has a problem in 'channeling' the story. One reason might be a re-imagining of certain story points. Another reason however is that there is a problem in where you are at in the story, so you need to look back and find out the problem with the 'journey' that prevents the tale from advancing.

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PostSubject: New Year Eve   New Year Eve Icon_minitimeOctober 25th 2016, 8:05 am

New Year`s Eve
Sometimes I thought I saw her
But it was someone else
The pain of my love
Had made me sick I could not
Eat or sleep
I had fallen into apathy didn’t shave or
Changed my clothes
Finally, I saw her through the window
Of a restaurant
She danced with him
 Firmly and lovingly
Just the way we used to dance
I screamed into the darkness

It was midnight and the church bells tolled
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