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Monthly Writing Prompt
For this month's writing prompt write a scene using the following sentence to start;

The streets were deserted. Where was everyone? Where had they all gone?

Writing Tip
Our monthly writing tips are written by our very own TerishD. You can read more in Terish's Blog located in "The Abstractions" area of the forum.

Look Back

When not able to write ahead, it helps to look back. In my case I had written a paragraph ahead of the story. What I needed to do was add a section of exposition (talking) presenting some facts. In going back, I realized that I could insert a section where a 'tour' of the surroundings could be done. This allowed for character interaction, story development, and other things that enabled me to present the facts in an entertaining manner.

One should not face a writer's block with the mentality of bursting through it. I have found in my own experience that a writer's block is usually due to my mind indicating that it has a problem in 'channeling' the story. One reason might be a re-imagining of certain story points. Another reason however is that there is a problem in where you are at in the story, so you need to look back and find out the problem with the 'journey' that prevents the tale from advancing.

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John Yamrus

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PostSubject: somebody take my picture, quick!   somebody take my picture, quick! Icon_minitimeSeptember 8th 2008, 5:09 pm

somebody take my picture, quick!

right now
kathy’s upstairs baking something.
i don’t know what it is, but
the recipe calls for whiskey.

she asked me to get it for her,
so i dug a bottle
of Jack Daniels
out of the liquor cabinet.

it’s right now sitting on top of
the desk in front of me,
along with my reading glasses
and some poems i just finished.

it’d make a great picture…

the hard-drinking and harder-living
poet,
knocking off the poems
and the JD
with equal skill.

a great picture.

take it now.

take it now and
i’ll sign it for you.

take it now and
i’ll give you twenty bucks
to go away.

take it now before you go upstairs
and take that other picture…

you know the one…

me,
in an apron,
taking cookies from the oven.
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Kellycakes

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Number of posts : 1136
Age : 46
Location : State of Thankfulness!
Current Mood : somebody take my picture, quick! Th_wel10
Registration date : 2008-07-17

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PostSubject: Re: somebody take my picture, quick!   somebody take my picture, quick! Icon_minitimeSeptember 10th 2008, 1:55 am

I love the idea behind this. In the end however; I didn't get whether you were now upstairs helping Kathy or are you actually Kathy? Great piece though, very creative.
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