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Is the phrase "Once upon a time..."
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Monthly Writing Prompt
For this month's writing prompt write a scene using the following sentence to start;

The streets were deserted. Where was everyone? Where had they all gone?

Writing Tip
Our monthly writing tips are written by our very own TerishD. You can read more in Terish's Blog located in "The Abstractions" area of the forum.

Look Back

When not able to write ahead, it helps to look back. In my case I had written a paragraph ahead of the story. What I needed to do was add a section of exposition (talking) presenting some facts. In going back, I realized that I could insert a section where a 'tour' of the surroundings could be done. This allowed for character interaction, story development, and other things that enabled me to present the facts in an entertaining manner.

One should not face a writer's block with the mentality of bursting through it. I have found in my own experience that a writer's block is usually due to my mind indicating that it has a problem in 'channeling' the story. One reason might be a re-imagining of certain story points. Another reason however is that there is a problem in where you are at in the story, so you need to look back and find out the problem with the 'journey' that prevents the tale from advancing.

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PostSubject: Casualty   Casualty Icon_minitimeSeptember 8th 2008, 10:56 am


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The lifeless eyes
The spirit cold
Where once had burned
A fire so bold

The battered heart
The troubled eyes
Too little truth
Too many lies

The downward gaze
The muffled sigh
That comes with watching
Life pass by

The aching need
So hard to bear
Healed only now
When love is there


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PostSubject: Re: Casualty   Casualty Icon_minitimeSeptember 10th 2008, 1:56 am

I love it!

Simple, flow is excellent and it has a slight story that keeps readers wanting to see the point.

Great write!
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