Would you like to react to this message? Create an account in a few clicks or log in to continue.



 
PortalHomeGallerySearchLatest imagesRegisterLog in
Log in
Username:
Password:
Log in automatically: 
:: I forgot my password
Poll
Is the phrase "Once upon a time..."
Overused
the muse Empty33%the muse Empty
 33% [ 1 ]
Underused
the muse Empty67%the muse Empty
 67% [ 2 ]
Total Votes : 3
Monthly Writing Prompt
For this month's writing prompt write a scene using the following sentence to start;

The streets were deserted. Where was everyone? Where had they all gone?

Writing Tip
Our monthly writing tips are written by our very own TerishD. You can read more in Terish's Blog located in "The Abstractions" area of the forum.

Look Back

When not able to write ahead, it helps to look back. In my case I had written a paragraph ahead of the story. What I needed to do was add a section of exposition (talking) presenting some facts. In going back, I realized that I could insert a section where a 'tour' of the surroundings could be done. This allowed for character interaction, story development, and other things that enabled me to present the facts in an entertaining manner.

One should not face a writer's block with the mentality of bursting through it. I have found in my own experience that a writer's block is usually due to my mind indicating that it has a problem in 'channeling' the story. One reason might be a re-imagining of certain story points. Another reason however is that there is a problem in where you are at in the story, so you need to look back and find out the problem with the 'journey' that prevents the tale from advancing.

Latest topics
» Abduction to Elfland: Part 4 (19)
the muse Icon_minitimeAugust 14th 2020, 6:22 am by TerishD

» Abduction to Elfland: Part 3 (13-18)
the muse Icon_minitimeAugust 9th 2020, 6:41 am by TerishD

» Abduction to Elfland: Part 2 (7-12)
the muse Icon_minitimeJuly 10th 2020, 6:30 am by TerishD

» Abduction to Elfland: Part 1 (1-6)
the muse Icon_minitimeJune 10th 2020, 6:33 am by TerishD

» To Know Sweet and Sour - Part Seven (35 - Epi)
the muse Icon_minitimeMay 11th 2020, 6:38 am by TerishD

Top posters
oskar (2320)
the muse Emptythe muse Voting_bar2the muse Empty 
TerishD (1441)
the muse Emptythe muse Voting_bar2the muse Empty 
HYdraMStar (1170)
the muse Emptythe muse Voting_bar2the muse Empty 
Kellycakes (1136)
the muse Emptythe muse Voting_bar2the muse Empty 
Snacker (818)
the muse Emptythe muse Voting_bar2the muse Empty 
Urs (569)
the muse Emptythe muse Voting_bar2the muse Empty 
fleamailman (400)
the muse Emptythe muse Voting_bar2the muse Empty 
Leaka (334)
the muse Emptythe muse Voting_bar2the muse Empty 
JuJu (287)
the muse Emptythe muse Voting_bar2the muse Empty 
alexandra (198)
the muse Emptythe muse Voting_bar2the muse Empty 

 

 the muse

Go down 
AuthorMessage
oskar

the muse Extrascribbler



Male
Number of posts : 2320
Age : 85
Location : portugal
Current Mood : the muse Th_coo10
Registration date : 2008-08-13

the muse Empty
PostSubject: the muse   the muse Icon_minitimeAugust 28th 2016, 5:59 am

The Muse
I remember it well when in the summer evenings
I went to see her we drank wine and made love
Embraced we slept to morning light.
Stay with me she said to rest a bit longer I will serve you tea
No, I wanted to go home savour the night in privacy
Feed the dog, go for a walk and write about my love for her.
It ended like a morning dream; she had found a man who
Drank her tea and stayed with her till he was too old
And she sent him to an old people’s home.
She had been my muse lives in my poems, but no,
I didn`t want to stay with her a painter rarely marries his model
But she will always be there hanging in some gallery
Or on the wall in the lobby of some hotel.
Back to top Go down
 
the muse
Back to top 
Page 1 of 1
 Similar topics
-
» To My Muse (a poem)
» they're my teachers, my muse...

Permissions in this forum:You cannot reply to topics in this forum
 :: The Verses (Poet's Forum) :: Versification-
Jump to: