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Is the phrase "Once upon a time..."
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Monthly Writing Prompt
For this month's writing prompt write a scene using the following sentence to start;

The streets were deserted. Where was everyone? Where had they all gone?

Writing Tip
Our monthly writing tips are written by our very own TerishD. You can read more in Terish's Blog located in "The Abstractions" area of the forum.

Look Back

When not able to write ahead, it helps to look back. In my case I had written a paragraph ahead of the story. What I needed to do was add a section of exposition (talking) presenting some facts. In going back, I realized that I could insert a section where a 'tour' of the surroundings could be done. This allowed for character interaction, story development, and other things that enabled me to present the facts in an entertaining manner.

One should not face a writer's block with the mentality of bursting through it. I have found in my own experience that a writer's block is usually due to my mind indicating that it has a problem in 'channeling' the story. One reason might be a re-imagining of certain story points. Another reason however is that there is a problem in where you are at in the story, so you need to look back and find out the problem with the 'journey' that prevents the tale from advancing.

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PostSubject: I'm Out   I'm Out Icon_minitimeSeptember 5th 2008, 10:50 pm

I’m lost
Wandering down that old beaten path
Of desolate dreams, untrue
I’m misplaced
Covered by a darkness of hope
Full of imagination
I’m missing
In a world beyond my expectations
Unable to grasp one fragment
I’m forlorn
In systematic yet isolated confusion
Wanting to compromise life
I’m omitted
Lead astray by my own doubt
And constant worry
I’m absent
In a body not my own
Covered with the scars of life
I’m vanished
Nowhere to be found, contemplating
Anything and everything
I’m gone
Out of my mind again
Not wanting to face authenticity
I’m out
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PostSubject: Re: I'm Out   I'm Out Icon_minitimeSeptember 6th 2008, 1:59 am

Short and to the point. Nice work!
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PostSubject: Reply   I'm Out Icon_minitimeSeptember 6th 2008, 7:51 am

I actually like this one. It held a consistent style. It held a consistent theme. It made its statement, then ended (unlike Snackers, I don't think it is short, but just right).

Enjoyed it Kellycakes. Thank you.
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PostSubject: Re: I'm Out   I'm Out Icon_minitimeSeptember 10th 2008, 2:14 am

Well thank you both very much for responding. I wrote this during a very dark time in my life and was surprised by its outcome being that most of what I wrote was trashed.
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