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Monthly Writing Prompt
For this month's writing prompt write a scene using the following sentence to start;

The streets were deserted. Where was everyone? Where had they all gone?

Writing Tip
Our monthly writing tips are written by our very own TerishD. You can read more in Terish's Blog located in "The Abstractions" area of the forum.

Look Back

When not able to write ahead, it helps to look back. In my case I had written a paragraph ahead of the story. What I needed to do was add a section of exposition (talking) presenting some facts. In going back, I realized that I could insert a section where a 'tour' of the surroundings could be done. This allowed for character interaction, story development, and other things that enabled me to present the facts in an entertaining manner.

One should not face a writer's block with the mentality of bursting through it. I have found in my own experience that a writer's block is usually due to my mind indicating that it has a problem in 'channeling' the story. One reason might be a re-imagining of certain story points. Another reason however is that there is a problem in where you are at in the story, so you need to look back and find out the problem with the 'journey' that prevents the tale from advancing.

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PostSubject: the lost tribe   the lost tribe Icon_minitimeApril 30th 2016, 4:40 am

The Lost Tribe
 
Holocaust, this tragic word, millions of life lost in its name, and it has not ended. This time,
 it is the Palestinians who are victims of a people
who have learned only one lesson, to survive one has to be shit and able to tell lies and
cynically play on Europe’s common guilt.
Hitler wasn’t able to remove the Jews, we, the Christian wouldn’t let him.
The people of Israel, who has taken upon themselves to emulate their former tormentors,
will not be able to eradicate the Palestinians, we, the despised and cowardly Christians,
will not let them.  The raw disregard the Israelites show against their Semitic brothers,
 borders to self- hate; it will corrupt them, they will sink into nihilism.
Dust upon dust the story could have been so different hadn’t they decided that kindness
was a hindrance when creating their tribal paradise.
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