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Monthly Writing Prompt
For this month's writing prompt write a scene using the following sentence to start;

The streets were deserted. Where was everyone? Where had they all gone?

Writing Tip
Our monthly writing tips are written by our very own TerishD. You can read more in Terish's Blog located in "The Abstractions" area of the forum.

Look Back

When not able to write ahead, it helps to look back. In my case I had written a paragraph ahead of the story. What I needed to do was add a section of exposition (talking) presenting some facts. In going back, I realized that I could insert a section where a 'tour' of the surroundings could be done. This allowed for character interaction, story development, and other things that enabled me to present the facts in an entertaining manner.

One should not face a writer's block with the mentality of bursting through it. I have found in my own experience that a writer's block is usually due to my mind indicating that it has a problem in 'channeling' the story. One reason might be a re-imagining of certain story points. Another reason however is that there is a problem in where you are at in the story, so you need to look back and find out the problem with the 'journey' that prevents the tale from advancing.

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PostSubject: gaza sonnet   gaza sonnet Icon_minitimeMarch 31st 2016, 6:05 am

Gaza Sonnet 
A doctor`s house with two daughters in it came
Under artillery fire while he who worked at the hospital in Gaza
 Trying to save life after yet another Israeli attack, lost both
 His children, the military late apologized.
After the funeral, the good doctor did not seek help for his
Immense suffering but carried on working while
Grief unburdened was eating him up.
One day he went to the beach the sea was calm and turquoise
 He undressed and began swimming he had to get away
 
A strong swimmer he swam long before an Israeli gunboat
Blew him out of the water, red turned to pink and then
Back to calming azure as the warped thinking of the occupiers
Said go he should have sought psychological help

For sorrow so deep that no well-meaning words would assuage
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