Delta Blue
Number of posts : 10 Registration date : 2008-09-04
| Subject: The Dreamer September 5th 2008, 1:09 pm | |
| The Dreamer
I dream of things I will not see And things I know will never be I wait for days that will not dawn And pray for far too many gone
I hope for better days to rise With less extreme, more compromise I wonder if we’ll ever learn That down some roads you never turn
A dreamer till the end I know I’ve found no other way to go This world remains so charred and burned By lessons taught but never learned
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AliceInWonderland
Number of posts : 44 Location : Germany Current Mood : Registration date : 2008-07-18
| Subject: Re: The Dreamer September 5th 2008, 2:13 pm | |
| I really love the last four lines | |
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HYdraMStar
Number of posts : 1170 Age : 45 Location : Charlotte, NC Current Mood : Registration date : 2008-07-20
| Subject: Re: The Dreamer September 5th 2008, 4:57 pm | |
| What was that Beatles song? The one that goes, "They say that I'm a dreamer...."
Anyway, that's sort of what this poem reminded me of. Not an all together bad thing.
It's simple, to the point and easy to read. | |
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Rose Strailo
Number of posts : 7 Age : 40 Location : Yuma Registration date : 2008-09-05
| Subject: Re: The Dreamer September 5th 2008, 8:36 pm | |
| I liked it. It was very smooth and flowed rather nicely. ^_^ | |
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