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Is the phrase "Once upon a time..."
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Monthly Writing Prompt
For this month's writing prompt write a scene using the following sentence to start;

The streets were deserted. Where was everyone? Where had they all gone?

Writing Tip
Our monthly writing tips are written by our very own TerishD. You can read more in Terish's Blog located in "The Abstractions" area of the forum.

Look Back

When not able to write ahead, it helps to look back. In my case I had written a paragraph ahead of the story. What I needed to do was add a section of exposition (talking) presenting some facts. In going back, I realized that I could insert a section where a 'tour' of the surroundings could be done. This allowed for character interaction, story development, and other things that enabled me to present the facts in an entertaining manner.

One should not face a writer's block with the mentality of bursting through it. I have found in my own experience that a writer's block is usually due to my mind indicating that it has a problem in 'channeling' the story. One reason might be a re-imagining of certain story points. Another reason however is that there is a problem in where you are at in the story, so you need to look back and find out the problem with the 'journey' that prevents the tale from advancing.

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PostSubject: Woman As Wing   Woman As Wing Icon_minitimeSeptember 5th 2008, 1:47 am

Her dirt encrusted feet
plant explosions of dust rise
charcoal Moons of her eyes
a forenoon of madness
blessed vibe retreat
medicine medicine her art
vain of consciousness
this smoldering sweat
beyond such body language
yet in its unbecoming
a primal understatement
lust in the bond to self
her dirt encrusted feet

The rhythm of her danse
a stone blood marker
flesh and Earth
eloping and divining
origin primordial seed
sown fertility
knows no strangers
of mute invitation
is she maiden lost
and future bound
silent sound of death
horrendous wail Universe
the rhythm of her danse

She hides behind eyes
what others might perceive
as illusion does she present
as Spirit and they watch
ever attentive from time caves
resolve not to know her
admonish the Children
look but do not touch
her open flame disembodied
from above alive and outside
she sees this delirious thing herself
certain knowledge of dervish
she hides behind eyes

So she leaves flying
accepts the role of stranger
knows she will never find herself
celebrates her abandonment
the spinning orb of her body
sorceress poetess diviner
a space yet errant of Earth
does she occupy the more
already a crone she laughs
through beautiful perfect white teeth
that men must lust for her flesh
as some tendermeat of time
so she leaves flying
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PostSubject: Re: Woman As Wing   Woman As Wing Icon_minitimeSeptember 5th 2008, 2:37 am

Wow, powerful stuff... that's really all I can say, bravo.
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