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Monthly Writing Prompt
For this month's writing prompt write a scene using the following sentence to start;

The streets were deserted. Where was everyone? Where had they all gone?

Writing Tip
Our monthly writing tips are written by our very own TerishD. You can read more in Terish's Blog located in "The Abstractions" area of the forum.

Look Back

When not able to write ahead, it helps to look back. In my case I had written a paragraph ahead of the story. What I needed to do was add a section of exposition (talking) presenting some facts. In going back, I realized that I could insert a section where a 'tour' of the surroundings could be done. This allowed for character interaction, story development, and other things that enabled me to present the facts in an entertaining manner.

One should not face a writer's block with the mentality of bursting through it. I have found in my own experience that a writer's block is usually due to my mind indicating that it has a problem in 'channeling' the story. One reason might be a re-imagining of certain story points. Another reason however is that there is a problem in where you are at in the story, so you need to look back and find out the problem with the 'journey' that prevents the tale from advancing.

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PostSubject: Heartache's Ocean   Heartache's Ocean Icon_minitimeSeptember 4th 2008, 10:14 pm

Turn the page to another chapter

It ended as all the others did

Hearts shattered by what was meant to be

He didn't see he completed me

Maybe that is an old cliche'

Or I'm just blinded by lost hope

But tomorrows another day

So I'll just cope

With all the tears I'm crying

I can fill the ocean so big

But this time it's different

For a moment my heart was filled

So I'll move on..

I won't whither away

But I have to admit

A piece of me died today


(An old-school piece I had in the back of a notebook. I actually enjoyed writing this even though the emotion behind it is somewhat sad and depressive.)
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