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Is the phrase "Once upon a time..."
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Monthly Writing Prompt
For this month's writing prompt write a scene using the following sentence to start;

The streets were deserted. Where was everyone? Where had they all gone?
Writing Tip
Our monthly writing tips are written by our very own TerishD. You can read more in Terish's Blog located in "The Abstractions" area of the forum.

Look Back

When not able to write ahead, it helps to look back. In my case I had written a paragraph ahead of the story. What I needed to do was add a section of exposition (talking) presenting some facts. In going back, I realized that I could insert a section where a 'tour' of the surroundings could be done. This allowed for character interaction, story development, and other things that enabled me to present the facts in an entertaining manner.

One should not face a writer's block with the mentality of bursting through it. I have found in my own experience that a writer's block is usually due to my mind indicating that it has a problem in 'channeling' the story. One reason might be a re-imagining of certain story points. Another reason however is that there is a problem in where you are at in the story, so you need to look back and find out the problem with the 'journey' that prevents the tale from advancing.

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PostSubject: Each Way Someone Bleeds   Each Way Someone Bleeds Icon_minitimeSeptember 4th 2008, 6:19 pm
Ahhh. Posting makes me so nervous. =/ Uhh, my friend and I were challenging each other one day to write poems based on random characters from book series'. She challenged me to write one from the perspective of Bella from The Twilight Saga. Haha. It's umm.. okay, I guess. >.<
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You just don’t see it do you?
The pain and misery I’ve been put through
One quite old and one quite new
It’s getting crazy, I’m torn in two

The first became my everything
The only thing I wanted
And though his pureness I could see
By the rest, he was taunted

The first left me without warning
That cut me up inside
It wasn’t something I could put aside
It was hardest in the morning

The second helped me after that
And things became much better
But he couldn’t break that barrier down
And the days just became wetter

The second tried his best to keep me
Even though he knew he wouldn’t
As much as I wanted to keep him close
I knew in my heart, that I couldn’t

The first returned under strange circumstances
Something hard to comprehend
The second had me doing dances
With the messages he tried to send

You just don’t see it do you?
How I cannot make this choice
It’s not something I want to do
Blocking out his voice.
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PostSubject: Re: Each Way Someone Bleeds   Each Way Someone Bleeds Icon_minitimeSeptember 4th 2008, 6:24 pm
I really enjoy reading your work. For a 16 year old you have a lot of writing potential. That is a reason why you are August's Poet of the Month.

It stuck a little bit in the third and fourth verse because of the rhyming, but all in one great work.

Btw...No reason to be nervous. Nobody here bites. Wink

We just tell you our opinion so you can improve your writing and get even better than you already are!
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PostSubject: Re: Each Way Someone Bleeds   Each Way Someone Bleeds Icon_minitimeSeptember 4th 2008, 6:29 pm
Snacker wrote:
I really enjoy reading your work. For a 16 year old you have a lot of writing potential. That is a reason why you are August's Poet of the Month.

It stuck a little bit in the third and fourth verse because of the rhyming, but all in one great work.

Thank you very much. =)

Oh yeah, you're probably right. I might work on it. ^^

Thanks again. ^.^
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PostSubject: Re: Each Way Someone Bleeds   Each Way Someone Bleeds Icon_minitimeSeptember 4th 2008, 9:20 pm
Pieces like this can stand on their own, no need to explain. I wouldn't have guessed that this particular piece was based on a fictional character because you relay the emotions of your word very well. Nice work and keep sharing.
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