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Monthly Writing Prompt
For this month's writing prompt write a scene using the following sentence to start;

The streets were deserted. Where was everyone? Where had they all gone?

Writing Tip
Our monthly writing tips are written by our very own TerishD. You can read more in Terish's Blog located in "The Abstractions" area of the forum.

Look Back

When not able to write ahead, it helps to look back. In my case I had written a paragraph ahead of the story. What I needed to do was add a section of exposition (talking) presenting some facts. In going back, I realized that I could insert a section where a 'tour' of the surroundings could be done. This allowed for character interaction, story development, and other things that enabled me to present the facts in an entertaining manner.

One should not face a writer's block with the mentality of bursting through it. I have found in my own experience that a writer's block is usually due to my mind indicating that it has a problem in 'channeling' the story. One reason might be a re-imagining of certain story points. Another reason however is that there is a problem in where you are at in the story, so you need to look back and find out the problem with the 'journey' that prevents the tale from advancing.

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PostSubject: Changes   Changes Icon_minitimeSeptember 4th 2008, 2:46 pm

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Changed am I from times now distant,
When days brought laughter’s ring to ear
Of golden dawns and nights
Ten thousand stars gazed down so clear

Lost inside those shifting shadows
Danger lurking near each door
Festers now, those wounds untended
Another casualty of war

Gone the dreams that soared the heavens
Crashing hard too far from real
What are we when our compassion
Turns into a heart of steel

Cursed the hands that chose the killing
It matters not what banner flew
Feel the tears forever forming
When they asked ‘what did you do’

Though the truth is still a shelter
See the light shine on our deeds
In the darkness Satan laughing
For we are meeting, all his needs

Sad that we will not remember,
Sadder still we will not learn
I for one will pay my penance
In that time when I will burn


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PostSubject: Re: Changes   Changes Icon_minitimeSeptember 4th 2008, 4:04 pm

There is no denying you have a command for words. This poem is beautifully written. The subject matter on the other hand I'll deflect my comments from and simply say I don't share your view.
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PostSubject: Re: Changes   Changes Icon_minitimeSeptember 4th 2008, 9:33 pm

I agree with Hydra your writing style is very 'poetic'. Very well written and this is not an easy subject to capture.
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PostSubject: Re: Changes   Changes Icon_minitimeSeptember 4th 2008, 10:51 pm

I enjoyed the poem.... The beautiful thing about writing is being the author of whatever touches your heart. Whether you agree or not is not the point, but the way that it was communicated was beautifully done.

Gone the dreams that soared the heavens
Crashing hard too far from real
What are we when our compassion
Turns into a heart of steel

Beautifl!!
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PostSubject: Re: Changes   Changes Icon_minitimeSeptember 4th 2008, 10:54 pm

Very well written. I enjoyed reading it. The rhymes flow what makes it easy to read.

Great piece of work.
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PostSubject: Re: Changes   Changes Icon_minitimeSeptember 5th 2008, 3:04 am

As a new member, I should have said something about what I write about. I'm a Vietnam Veteran, did 3 combat tours in the Mekong Delta (mekong DELTA--
navy BLUE....its a slang term we used for navy personel fighting in country on the rivers, I write for the most part about the MRF...Mobile Riverine Force...my heroes,
I try to tell their story. Most of my work is about them. I didn't find a catagory specifically for it on this site, I don't mean to offend anyone, or argue, just warning you up front...I don't speak for them, but I write about them....I don;t expect anyone to agree with how I feel, nor do I presume to be right, it's just how I felt at a moment in time, nothing more.....sorry to be tiresome about it...your replys were all kind...thank you....but it will get worse...lololol

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PostSubject: Re: Changes   Changes Icon_minitimeSeptember 5th 2008, 3:10 am

Welcome aboard Russell.

I'm happy to see that we have all kind of people here on Scribbles. Please introduce yourself in the 'Scribbles Appendages' section so we all get to know you.

Glad to have you here.
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