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Monthly Writing Prompt
For this month's writing prompt write a scene using the following sentence to start;

The streets were deserted. Where was everyone? Where had they all gone?

Writing Tip
Our monthly writing tips are written by our very own TerishD. You can read more in Terish's Blog located in "The Abstractions" area of the forum.

Look Back

When not able to write ahead, it helps to look back. In my case I had written a paragraph ahead of the story. What I needed to do was add a section of exposition (talking) presenting some facts. In going back, I realized that I could insert a section where a 'tour' of the surroundings could be done. This allowed for character interaction, story development, and other things that enabled me to present the facts in an entertaining manner.

One should not face a writer's block with the mentality of bursting through it. I have found in my own experience that a writer's block is usually due to my mind indicating that it has a problem in 'channeling' the story. One reason might be a re-imagining of certain story points. Another reason however is that there is a problem in where you are at in the story, so you need to look back and find out the problem with the 'journey' that prevents the tale from advancing.

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John Yamrus

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PostSubject: while taking a leak today   while taking a leak today Icon_minitimeSeptember 4th 2008, 9:34 am

while taking a leak today

that last drop
(the one that
usually ends up
on your pants)
shook off
onto my hand.

and it struck me
as pure and clear
as a line
from the Diamond Sutra
that no matter
how hard
we try to negate
or deny
our humanity…

we can never
really
shake it.
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PostSubject: Re: while taking a leak today   while taking a leak today Icon_minitimeSeptember 4th 2008, 3:59 pm

Funny, thoughtful, and simple; I loved it.
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PostSubject: Re: while taking a leak today   while taking a leak today Icon_minitimeSeptember 4th 2008, 5:03 pm

why thank you. i'm glad you liked it. i'll post more maybe tomorrow
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PostSubject: Re: while taking a leak today   while taking a leak today Icon_minitimeSeptember 4th 2008, 9:27 pm

My first thought when only looking at the title: 'Oh God, toilet poetry'. Surprisingly though it made me think, and that is what writing is all about.
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