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Is the phrase "Once upon a time..."
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Monthly Writing Prompt
For this month's writing prompt write a scene using the following sentence to start;

The streets were deserted. Where was everyone? Where had they all gone?

Writing Tip
Our monthly writing tips are written by our very own TerishD. You can read more in Terish's Blog located in "The Abstractions" area of the forum.

Look Back

When not able to write ahead, it helps to look back. In my case I had written a paragraph ahead of the story. What I needed to do was add a section of exposition (talking) presenting some facts. In going back, I realized that I could insert a section where a 'tour' of the surroundings could be done. This allowed for character interaction, story development, and other things that enabled me to present the facts in an entertaining manner.

One should not face a writer's block with the mentality of bursting through it. I have found in my own experience that a writer's block is usually due to my mind indicating that it has a problem in 'channeling' the story. One reason might be a re-imagining of certain story points. Another reason however is that there is a problem in where you are at in the story, so you need to look back and find out the problem with the 'journey' that prevents the tale from advancing.

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PostSubject: Always with you   Always with you Icon_minitimeJuly 18th 2008, 3:53 am

Sometimes
When I have to go
I don't do that really
You just can't see me than
Not longer touch me
But I will always be with you doesn't matter where you are
Will be the wind that goes softly through your hair
The rain that touch your skin
The rainbow on the skyline that present you the most beautiful colors
The sun that warm you up
The smell from the summer that you inhale
The earth on which you're walking
The night in that I let the stars beam for you
The day which gives you thousand surprises
The hope which hold you when you're sad
The feeling that is into you
When you're lucky

You can speak with me cause I will ever hear you
Or just cry
Then I take you into my arms
And you will feel you free
I will guards over your sleep
And present you wonderful dreams
You don't have to be scared
If you think about
You're never be alone
Cause I will ever be there
If you think at me
Like I am at you
I love you...
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