Snacker
Number of posts : 818 Age : 39 Location : Stuck in Michigan Current Mood : Registration date : 2008-07-17
| Subject: Finally August 30th 2008, 7:28 pm | |
| Out of here and now and in your eyes I see a million tears passing by and by It was hard sometimes to keep our love alive But we tried to go on Yes we tried, we tried, we tried
I look back, in the review-mirror A long road, of a strong belief, that...
Finally It’s you and me Worlds are breaking down And no one can see That finally We will be Two everlasting souls In a wild wild sea Finally
We never wasted time to count our scares But they always told us , who we are We tried to heal the wounds with all our love Two soul mates, with one heart
I look back, in the review-mirror A long road, of a strong belief, that...
Out of here and now and in your eyes I see a million stars falling down
Finally It’s you and me Worlds are breaking down And no one can see That finally We will be Two everlasting souls In a wild wild sea Finally
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Kellycakes
Number of posts : 1136 Age : 47 Location : State of Thankfulness! Current Mood : Registration date : 2008-07-17
| Subject: Re: Finally August 30th 2008, 8:07 pm | |
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- A long road, of a strong believe, that...
believe = belief Another song? The chorus is perfect and the second verse breaks the whole piece down because it is only 4 lines as opposed to 5 in the first verse. The bridge is nice as well. Maybe you should rewrite this and move it over to the songwriting forum. Just my opinion. BTW: Love the line... - Quote :
- Out of here and now and in your eyes
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