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When not able to write ahead, it helps to look back. In my case I had written a paragraph ahead of the story. What I needed to do was add a section of exposition (talking) presenting some facts. In going back, I realized that I could insert a section where a 'tour' of the surroundings could be done. This allowed for character interaction, story development, and other things that enabled me to present the facts in an entertaining manner.

One should not face a writer's block with the mentality of bursting through it. I have found in my own experience that a writer's block is usually due to my mind indicating that it has a problem in 'channeling' the story. One reason might be a re-imagining of certain story points. Another reason however is that there is a problem in where you are at in the story, so you need to look back and find out the problem with the 'journey' that prevents the tale from advancing.

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PostSubject: But Words Will Always Hurt Me   But Words Will Always Hurt Me Icon_minitimeAugust 28th 2008, 4:48 pm

A/N: Wrote this about 2 years ago, I was about.. 14. XD. I don't know why but it's always been the favorite of mine of my poetry. *shrugs*. So I guess... ''enjoy''. :P
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Those three last words
Were not the ones I wanted
Were not the ones I needed
Yet by them, I am haunted

Those three last words
Were everything to me
Were all my hopes and dreams
Yet that, you fail to see

Those three last words
Were entirely up to you
Were totally under your control
Yet you shortened it to two

Those three last words
Were the meaning of my existence
Were the reason that I lived
Yet you put up this resistence

Those three last words
Were the be all and end all
Were the last thing I thought of
Yet you stood there proud and tall

Those three last words
I remember today
Or should I say two
Go Away
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PostSubject: Re: But Words Will Always Hurt Me   But Words Will Always Hurt Me Icon_minitimeAugust 28th 2008, 4:53 pm

Wow this is a great piece of work. I liked that it flowed smoothly when I read it. It had a total twist in the end. Never thought that it would be like that.

Great work. Keep it going Wink
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PostSubject: Re: But Words Will Always Hurt Me   But Words Will Always Hurt Me Icon_minitimeAugust 28th 2008, 5:00 pm

Snacker wrote:
Wow this is a great piece of work. I liked that it flowed smoothly when I read it. It had a total twist in the end. Never thought that it would be like that.

Great work. Keep it going Wink

Hehehe. Thank you very much! Smile
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PostSubject: Re: But Words Will Always Hurt Me   But Words Will Always Hurt Me Icon_minitimeAugust 28th 2008, 6:50 pm

"Go Away," is my favorite phrase to use when someone is annoying me with silly questions or unwanted advances, but that's neither here nor there I suppose.

I thought you did a great job of capturing the emotion. It's not perfect, but very impressive considering how young you were when you wrote it.
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PostSubject: Re: But Words Will Always Hurt Me   But Words Will Always Hurt Me Icon_minitimeAugust 30th 2008, 8:14 pm

I agree, your age seems to be the surprising thing to me. Its a very impressive piece considering I know a few grown ups that can't produce poetry such as this. Wonderful piece, smooth and exciting all the way to the end. Its full of teenage angst but doesn't come off as juvenile and needy. Nice job.
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PostSubject: Re: But Words Will Always Hurt Me   But Words Will Always Hurt Me Icon_minitimeAugust 31st 2008, 5:37 pm

Oooh, thank you guys ! Very Happy

Teehee. It was at first for English class which I was kinda failing so I needed something good to help my grade out. :P
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