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Is the phrase "Once upon a time..."
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Monthly Writing Prompt
For this month's writing prompt write a scene using the following sentence to start;

The streets were deserted. Where was everyone? Where had they all gone?

Writing Tip
Our monthly writing tips are written by our very own TerishD. You can read more in Terish's Blog located in "The Abstractions" area of the forum.

Look Back

When not able to write ahead, it helps to look back. In my case I had written a paragraph ahead of the story. What I needed to do was add a section of exposition (talking) presenting some facts. In going back, I realized that I could insert a section where a 'tour' of the surroundings could be done. This allowed for character interaction, story development, and other things that enabled me to present the facts in an entertaining manner.

One should not face a writer's block with the mentality of bursting through it. I have found in my own experience that a writer's block is usually due to my mind indicating that it has a problem in 'channeling' the story. One reason might be a re-imagining of certain story points. Another reason however is that there is a problem in where you are at in the story, so you need to look back and find out the problem with the 'journey' that prevents the tale from advancing.

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PostSubject: wonderful America   wonderful America Icon_minitimeAugust 21st 2013, 7:25 pm

Wonderful America.
Sometimes we are blind
And do not see that USA
Is much more than
Washington and partisan Politics.

In Kansas they do not care
About Washington they work
Hard and like their ribs and
Drink lots of beer.

America is a great place where
You can enjoy life to the fullest
People give a damn about politics
They leave that to Washington.

Americans donĀ“t know why they are
Hated abroad they watch Fox News
And do not read about killer drones
Falling somewhere far away

America is the peoples Paradise
The innocence of good will, providing
You are not poor and do not
Ask too many awkward questions.
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