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Is the phrase "Once upon a time..."
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Monthly Writing Prompt
For this month's writing prompt write a scene using the following sentence to start;

The streets were deserted. Where was everyone? Where had they all gone?

Writing Tip
Our monthly writing tips are written by our very own TerishD. You can read more in Terish's Blog located in "The Abstractions" area of the forum.

Look Back

When not able to write ahead, it helps to look back. In my case I had written a paragraph ahead of the story. What I needed to do was add a section of exposition (talking) presenting some facts. In going back, I realized that I could insert a section where a 'tour' of the surroundings could be done. This allowed for character interaction, story development, and other things that enabled me to present the facts in an entertaining manner.

One should not face a writer's block with the mentality of bursting through it. I have found in my own experience that a writer's block is usually due to my mind indicating that it has a problem in 'channeling' the story. One reason might be a re-imagining of certain story points. Another reason however is that there is a problem in where you are at in the story, so you need to look back and find out the problem with the 'journey' that prevents the tale from advancing.

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PostSubject: calamity   calamity Icon_minitimeAugust 12th 2013, 6:22 am

The Calamity

Over the years the tragedy has a mythical aura.
It was a New Year eve and the water in town´s
lake was deemed safe to hold a lot of people.
The boy, being quite fearful, stood near shore
when he noticed the ice was detached from
land, it had become a gigantic moving ice flake.
Quickly he jumped ashore and there was what
sounded as an explosion when the ice broke up
into floes. Great terror and screams, the boy saw
horse and sled disappearing and neighing of
the animals rang in his ear for days. The night was
black as was the ice where white hands, above
water, looked like lilies in a field of dread.
The boy took fright and run home, but didn´t tell
her mother what he had witnessed.
The boy is an old man now and no longer sure
if it really happened and there is no one he can
ask because those who might know the real truth
are long since dead.
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