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Is the phrase "Once upon a time..."
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Monthly Writing Prompt
For this month's writing prompt write a scene using the following sentence to start;

The streets were deserted. Where was everyone? Where had they all gone?

Writing Tip
Our monthly writing tips are written by our very own TerishD. You can read more in Terish's Blog located in "The Abstractions" area of the forum.

Look Back

When not able to write ahead, it helps to look back. In my case I had written a paragraph ahead of the story. What I needed to do was add a section of exposition (talking) presenting some facts. In going back, I realized that I could insert a section where a 'tour' of the surroundings could be done. This allowed for character interaction, story development, and other things that enabled me to present the facts in an entertaining manner.

One should not face a writer's block with the mentality of bursting through it. I have found in my own experience that a writer's block is usually due to my mind indicating that it has a problem in 'channeling' the story. One reason might be a re-imagining of certain story points. Another reason however is that there is a problem in where you are at in the story, so you need to look back and find out the problem with the 'journey' that prevents the tale from advancing.

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PostSubject: Captivating Lust   Captivating Lust Icon_minitimeAugust 16th 2008, 10:50 pm

I'm obsessed with you
Regard you with eyes of fascination
Can leave and forget all reality
Just to hear the sound of your voice

I was attracted magnetically in your direction
My steps, faster almost floating towards you
Your kisses like powerful drugs
Hot and sensually, leaving me addicted

Sensitively kept surrounded with magic
Only air when we're lying next to each other
Your fingertips glazing my neck
Love kicks off, ready to fly

Clenched, kept and totally trapped
Climaxes of pleasure, the earth quakes
Topping of togetherness, hovering and landing
In a capture of hazy love, this is where love lives
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PostSubject: Re: Captivating Lust   Captivating Lust Icon_minitimeAugust 17th 2008, 12:08 am

This is my favorite line, "I was attracted magnetically in your direction."

Great work!
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