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Is the phrase "Once upon a time..."
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Monthly Writing Prompt
For this month's writing prompt write a scene using the following sentence to start;

The streets were deserted. Where was everyone? Where had they all gone?

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Our monthly writing tips are written by our very own TerishD. You can read more in Terish's Blog located in "The Abstractions" area of the forum.

Look Back

When not able to write ahead, it helps to look back. In my case I had written a paragraph ahead of the story. What I needed to do was add a section of exposition (talking) presenting some facts. In going back, I realized that I could insert a section where a 'tour' of the surroundings could be done. This allowed for character interaction, story development, and other things that enabled me to present the facts in an entertaining manner.

One should not face a writer's block with the mentality of bursting through it. I have found in my own experience that a writer's block is usually due to my mind indicating that it has a problem in 'channeling' the story. One reason might be a re-imagining of certain story points. Another reason however is that there is a problem in where you are at in the story, so you need to look back and find out the problem with the 'journey' that prevents the tale from advancing.

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PostSubject: Worried Water Vertebrates    Worried Water Vertebrates  Icon_minitimeMarch 17th 2012, 10:25 am

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And the sun keeps on shining a bit warmer now in Mars.
But rain keeps away and fish in the cisterna are worried.

Is this the end of their world? Tiny fishes lives on what?
Planned cannibalism every two, three months, perhaps?

Small and translucent I see their quickening heart beats.
Open the cisterna’s lid so they can see the blue clear sky.

Since they may take me for the creator must show them
They are not forsaken and I cannot be blamed for this.

And the sun keeps on shining, a bit warmer now in Mars,
But Louis, the farmer, and I know this can lead to calamity.

Cisterna... a place to store rainwater (Portuguese)
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