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Monthly Writing Prompt
For this month's writing prompt write a scene using the following sentence to start;

The streets were deserted. Where was everyone? Where had they all gone?

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Our monthly writing tips are written by our very own TerishD. You can read more in Terish's Blog located in "The Abstractions" area of the forum.

Look Back

When not able to write ahead, it helps to look back. In my case I had written a paragraph ahead of the story. What I needed to do was add a section of exposition (talking) presenting some facts. In going back, I realized that I could insert a section where a 'tour' of the surroundings could be done. This allowed for character interaction, story development, and other things that enabled me to present the facts in an entertaining manner.

One should not face a writer's block with the mentality of bursting through it. I have found in my own experience that a writer's block is usually due to my mind indicating that it has a problem in 'channeling' the story. One reason might be a re-imagining of certain story points. Another reason however is that there is a problem in where you are at in the story, so you need to look back and find out the problem with the 'journey' that prevents the tale from advancing.

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PostSubject: Baby I'm here for you   Baby I'm here for you Icon_minitimeAugust 12th 2008, 3:58 am

I'm staring at this screen
Not knowing what to say
But knowing that I need
To say something

You're hurting
And I want to be there
To ease your pain

You may never know
How much I truly love you
And how I've only wanted
You to be happy

I have to be completely honest however
That I light up inside
At the mere thought
That just maybe
You'd see me
For what I am

And that would be
So deeply in love with you

And I know the skeptical you
Is doubting this to be true

Well I'm not sure myself
How or why
I only know that I do

I have never felt anything as strong
As my feelings are
For you
Ever

Baby I'm here for you
If you should need me
I'm only a phone call away

And I would never betray
Your trust
For you mean everything
To me
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