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Is the phrase "Once upon a time..."
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I don't ever let you go Empty33%I don't ever let you go Empty
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I don't ever let you go Empty67%I don't ever let you go Empty
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Monthly Writing Prompt
For this month's writing prompt write a scene using the following sentence to start;

The streets were deserted. Where was everyone? Where had they all gone?

Writing Tip
Our monthly writing tips are written by our very own TerishD. You can read more in Terish's Blog located in "The Abstractions" area of the forum.

Look Back

When not able to write ahead, it helps to look back. In my case I had written a paragraph ahead of the story. What I needed to do was add a section of exposition (talking) presenting some facts. In going back, I realized that I could insert a section where a 'tour' of the surroundings could be done. This allowed for character interaction, story development, and other things that enabled me to present the facts in an entertaining manner.

One should not face a writer's block with the mentality of bursting through it. I have found in my own experience that a writer's block is usually due to my mind indicating that it has a problem in 'channeling' the story. One reason might be a re-imagining of certain story points. Another reason however is that there is a problem in where you are at in the story, so you need to look back and find out the problem with the 'journey' that prevents the tale from advancing.

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I don't ever let you go Empty
PostSubject: I don't ever let you go   I don't ever let you go Icon_minitimeJuly 18th 2008, 3:42 am

I know that you've been hurt
Verbally battered and abused
So I be careful with your heart
It can't take another bruise

Your trust has been shattered
Your hope only fell
You were torn between living life
Cause your life was already hell

I taught you how to love again
And not to fake a smile
I wanna give you feelings your heart
That you haven't felt in a while

You can't explain the feeling
When I wrap you in my arms
Its like nothing could ever hurt you
Cause I'll protect you from any harm

Every time we say goodbye
I never want to go
I hold you tight, it feels so right
i don't ever let you go
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