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Is the phrase "Once upon a time..."
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Monthly Writing Prompt
For this month's writing prompt write a scene using the following sentence to start;

The streets were deserted. Where was everyone? Where had they all gone?

Writing Tip
Our monthly writing tips are written by our very own TerishD. You can read more in Terish's Blog located in "The Abstractions" area of the forum.

Look Back

When not able to write ahead, it helps to look back. In my case I had written a paragraph ahead of the story. What I needed to do was add a section of exposition (talking) presenting some facts. In going back, I realized that I could insert a section where a 'tour' of the surroundings could be done. This allowed for character interaction, story development, and other things that enabled me to present the facts in an entertaining manner.

One should not face a writer's block with the mentality of bursting through it. I have found in my own experience that a writer's block is usually due to my mind indicating that it has a problem in 'channeling' the story. One reason might be a re-imagining of certain story points. Another reason however is that there is a problem in where you are at in the story, so you need to look back and find out the problem with the 'journey' that prevents the tale from advancing.

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PostSubject: As she walked away   As she walked away Icon_minitimeAugust 11th 2008, 1:26 pm

As she walked away
She felt a loose
A heart breaking
"It was not mine" she said

As she walked away
She felt something wet
Running down her cheeks
"It's just the rain" she stated

Before she walked away
She instructed herself not to feel a thing
To remember all the torture
That she would leave behind (she thought)

As she walked away
She felt something coming with her
It was her past, hidden in her backpack
Constantly whispering

As she was gone
A mother cried
Cause of all of her mistakes
Knowing her daughter would never come back
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PostSubject: Reply   As she walked away Icon_minitimeAugust 11th 2008, 5:35 pm

The meter was not consistent, but the theme was. Being more of a story person, I felt the connection in the presentation to have more weight than the poetry. It did a good job of setting the moment. I thus enjoyed it.
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